Dreams Lost
Don't give up on...11 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Another Acrostic poem writing prompt contest. Good job following the contest rules. Nice presentation... writing the first letter in blue really helps.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Excellent entry for the Another Acrostic poem writing prompt contest. Good job following the contest rules. Nice presentation... writing the first letter in blue really helps.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you, I really appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from LisaMay
I enjoyed reading your well-crafted poem on the nature of dreams. They come and go, leaving unfulfilled emptiness behind, but there are always more to look forward to - don't give up hope is the message. The heart holds many dreams.
(The O in the acrostic needs to be changed from black to blue.)
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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I enjoyed reading your well-crafted poem on the nature of dreams. They come and go, leaving unfulfilled emptiness behind, but there are always more to look forward to - don't give up hope is the message. The heart holds many dreams.
(The O in the acrostic needs to be changed from black to blue.)
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much, I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I think your picture appropriately demonstrates how reaching dreams seems to some, especially those that have been abandoned. I love acrostic poems and you did a nice job with this one. Good luck!
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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I think your picture appropriately demonstrates how reaching dreams seems to some, especially those that have been abandoned. I love acrostic poems and you did a nice job with this one. Good luck!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thanknyou for reading my poem and for your kind words. :)
Comment from Beri Bee
I love the very concept of lost dreams! This poem makes me wonder if anyone does know where they go, and imagine they might all come back in a dream if we summon them again. But will they find the same fate? This is the question this poem has me asking. Thanks for the thoughtful thoughts!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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I love the very concept of lost dreams! This poem makes me wonder if anyone does know where they go, and imagine they might all come back in a dream if we summon them again. But will they find the same fate? This is the question this poem has me asking. Thanks for the thoughtful thoughts!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review, it's so nice to hear from you. :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
Your acrostic is very well done - Dreams Lost. Good rhyming throughout and the picture you have chosen is perfect. Great advice for all of us to not let our dreams die, but just keep on trying to achieve.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Your acrostic is very well done - Dreams Lost. Good rhyming throughout and the picture you have chosen is perfect. Great advice for all of us to not let our dreams die, but just keep on trying to achieve.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this nice review, I'm always glad to hear from you.:)
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You are welcome
Comment from Wendy G
That's a very interesting and well - written acrostic. Good use of rhyme and excellent metre as well. I like your entry, so sending best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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That's a very interesting and well - written acrostic. Good use of rhyme and excellent metre as well. I like your entry, so sending best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you I'm glad that you liked it. I appreciate this encouraging review. :)
Comment from jessizero
So our lost dreams are hiding out in our hearts? It makes sense. I never thought about it. I liked your acrostic poem with rhyme. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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So our lost dreams are hiding out in our hearts? It makes sense. I never thought about it. I liked your acrostic poem with rhyme. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Of course they're there...take a look! Lol. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Sally Law
Fantastic poem for this coming contest and easy to read. The encouraging word inside is most appreciated and needed.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Fantastic poem for this coming contest and easy to read. The encouraging word inside is most appreciated and needed.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this thoughtful review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Love this inspirational acrostic you have penned for the contest! The first have is sadly very relatable. Many people with give up on their dreams but we must fight to keep them alive!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Love this inspirational acrostic you have penned for the contest! The first have is sadly very relatable. Many people with give up on their dreams but we must fight to keep them alive!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Thank you, I certainly agree with you about that. Thanks so much for this excellent review. :)
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery poet a good day to you. I hope this fins you well. I like your Acrostic poem you executed well with your thoughts Dreams lost. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Hello mystery poet a good day to you. I hope this fins you well. I like your Acrostic poem you executed well with your thoughts Dreams lost. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Thank you, that's very nice of you to say. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
