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A Tribute to Our Family Home

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Comment from karenina
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Very clever write in the perfect form for this "silly" woodpecker! I used to live in the country and would awaken to this rat-a-tat-tat every morning! Not sure about "him"--but I sure got a headache! Good for you on this NaPoWriMo challenge! You are aporoaching the finish line! Alas, I started but fell too far behind...

Karenina


 Comment Written 30-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
    Thanks ever so much for your fun review! And no wonder you fell behind what with covid and all! Sending lots of good wishes your way!
reply by karenina on 30-Apr-2022
    Thanks.... We're all plodding through!
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
    Do keep it up!
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Those tireless suckers, or maybe I should have said peckers, will drive any sane person senseless with that constant noise making. Not everything about nature is good. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
    Amen to that! Woodpeckers, mosquitoes, wasps, snakes...I think that is why I prefer to be indoors! LOL
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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They destroy homes. Rocks are covering the holes. Aluminum foil was supposed to deter them. I always wanted a rock house, lol. Thank you for sharing .


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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
    Hehe, a rock house would do the trick! Thanks for your fun comment, Carolyn!
Comment from Goosey Gander
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I love the format of your Staccato poem! And yes, extremely fitting! I love how you can just... write about any topic. BTW, have you come up with a prompt yet? I NEED one!!!
-GGG

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
    Thank you so much, dear GGG! I am almost through this challenge!! Let?s see?a prompt for you...would you like to write about one of your houses? :)
Comment from lyenochka
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Enjoyed your staccato poem about the pesky woodpecker. Hopefully, he wasn't trying to impress a female with all that racket! I have heard that the woodpecker protects his brain from damage from all that beating against the wood by using his tongue:
https://abcbirds.org/blog21/woodpecker-tongues/

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
    Oh, my goodness! You answered my question, Helen! I just looked at the article you reference. I had no idea! That is fascinating. I love to learn of all the things scientists choose to study. Thanks so much for sharing!
reply by lyenochka on 28-Apr-2022
    The world is so full of fascinating discoveries! 💖
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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Thank you for introducing me to this poem form. It looks like a great candidate for one f my last few... I like rhymes, but seem to have run out of suitable variety this morning. I'm sure I can't have really, but this looks as though it could be interesting - certainly it was the best possible candidate for your insistantly repetitive woodpecker. Kate xx

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
    It has indeed been a creative challenge, Kate, this NaPoWriMo! I am honored to have introduced you to the Staccato. Best wishes for the home stretch. We can do it!
Comment from juliaSjames
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You chose a great poetic form for this write about your resident woodpecker. Did you ever get accustomed to the hammering? I know woodpeckers can be pretty loud. Thanks for sharing.

Stay safe and blessed, Julia

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
    Thanks so much, Julia. The Staccato really did seem like the perfect choice for this topic! And no--I didn't ever get used to the annoying rapid-fire hammering! LOL
Comment from LisaMay
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That staccato form is perfect for your woodpecker poem.
'sleeps yanked, dreams leave' is a great way to describe the interruption. Your poem continues with humor but the noise must be incredibly annoying.

We don't have woodpeckers in NZ - they sound rather destructive, and like you, I would wonder about getting a headache, or even concussion.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
    Thank you for your review of my woodpecker poem, LisaMay. They are pretty but annoying little critters!