Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I enjoyed how you've utilized the attributes of your relationship to show the depth of your intimacy together... life-long til journey's end. Such loyalty and commitment is inspirational.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022

Thank you, LisaMay, for your read and encouraging review.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and presentation.
-A good topic for your acrostic.
-Very good descriptive detail.
-I like the adjectives you chose
and then separating them to show the examples.
-You show the love and caring relationship
you have with each other very well.
-I like your last two lines as a summary
of your journey together.
-To fit your overall pattern, you
could put a comma after 'Mesmerizing.'
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022

Thank you for your careful read and comments. I could not decide if a comma was needed after mesmerizing. But since you suggest I will edit.

reply by Pam (respa) on 27-Apr-2022

You are welcome. I suggested it since most of your lines were the same way. I didn't think about the meaning the other way. But for a contest, I think consistency is better:)

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022

Appreciate the suggestion and I incorporated the comma.

reply by Pam (respa) on 28-Apr-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I love your acrostic poem. It speaks of true love enduring, and I really like to think that it can be possible. Thank you for sharing this here. Best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022

Thank you for the read and the encouraging review.