One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Laurie Holding
This is just lovely. I especially liked your manipulation of letters and words on the physical space, and really loved your background color, which reminds me of one of the dozens of colors you'll find in the Mediterranean Sea. Well done, and I wish you luck!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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This is just lovely. I especially liked your manipulation of letters and words on the physical space, and really loved your background color, which reminds me of one of the dozens of colors you'll find in the Mediterranean Sea. Well done, and I wish you luck!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your kind review, you are very kind.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy,
This is a beautiful free verse.
The imagery is gorgeous and there is so much emotion and nostalgia lingering around each word. I especially like this part -'where my childhood still plays on your beach' - it gives us a sense of place, and those dreams and memories stem from that place.
Just lovely.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Hello Gypsy,
This is a beautiful free verse.
The imagery is gorgeous and there is so much emotion and nostalgia lingering around each word. I especially like this part -'where my childhood still plays on your beach' - it gives us a sense of place, and those dreams and memories stem from that place.
Just lovely.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your kind review, you are very kind.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RGstar
And a lovely piece of writing too. A lovely part of the world where expression is one that should be filled with tales of warmth and history. The Mediterranean surely plays its part.
Bravo.
I liked this little poem.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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And a lovely piece of writing too. A lovely part of the world where expression is one that should be filled with tales of warmth and history. The Mediterranean surely plays its part.
Bravo.
I liked this little poem.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review, RGstar. May you have a wonderful day
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful free verse poem, Gypsy. I really did enjoy getting to know a little more about you and your words did indeed answer a few questions. I loved the picture of the birds flying over the ocean. The Mediterranean. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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This was a wonderful free verse poem, Gypsy. I really did enjoy getting to know a little more about you and your words did indeed answer a few questions. I loved the picture of the birds flying over the ocean. The Mediterranean. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review,
Aryr. May you have a wonderful day
Gypsy hugs
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy, blessed be n hugs.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and missing to place you come from is a powerful thing----I guess I'm lucky----lived around this area my entire life so nothing to miss
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and missing to place you come from is a powerful thing----I guess I'm lucky----lived around this area my entire life so nothing to miss
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review,
Mike. Original May you have a wonderful day
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sarah Tummey
This is a lovely tribute to your childhood, Gypsy. I enjoyed reading it. My favourite lines are "You haunt my dreams like a man, Soaked in Old Spice" - brilliant.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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This is a lovely tribute to your childhood, Gypsy. I enjoyed reading it. My favourite lines are "You haunt my dreams like a man, Soaked in Old Spice" - brilliant.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Sarah. You're very kind.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A beautifully written free verse poem not only does it show your love for this sea, but it brings your reader to see the beauty and share the moment in stunning words and imagery.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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A beautifully written free verse poem not only does it show your love for this sea, but it brings your reader to see the beauty and share the moment in stunning words and imagery.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Mary. You're very kind.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very interesting and very neat Free Verse poem you have penned. The art work you chose to go with your words was amazing. You used very good descriptive words also. This was very interesting and very neat. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings Teri
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Gypsy, This is a very interesting and very neat Free Verse poem you have penned. The art work you chose to go with your words was amazing. You used very good descriptive words also. This was very interesting and very neat. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings Teri
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review, I appreciate it.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Haylee Hemphill
I really enjoy everything about this piece from the words to the structure and presentation. You did a fantastic job. This felt very nostalgic and heartfelt.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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I really enjoy everything about this piece from the words to the structure and presentation. You did a fantastic job. This felt very nostalgic and heartfelt.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review, I appreciate it.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Yardier
A song for sure. The melody for the Mediterranean in your poem lifts the soul yet lingers with a wisp of melancholy. You may have been born in the Mediterranean but............... You can never leave................
All the best, Yard.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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A song for sure. The melody for the Mediterranean in your poem lifts the soul yet lingers with a wisp of melancholy. You may have been born in the Mediterranean but............... You can never leave................
All the best, Yard.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Yard, thank you very much for your time and exceptional review, I appreciate the stellar six stars rating. You are most kind.
Gypsy hugs