Comment from Eugenette Morin

Excellent

A very suggestive answer to the challenge. Excellent work and I love the way you played with the font. It added to the feeling of lasciviousness this poem breathes. Good luck, this is a strong entry

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022

Awesome! Thank you, Eugenette. I appreciate the time you took to read, review and rate my work.

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore

Excellent

I love this post. You used nine words to describe a sensual moment
between lovers. This is sexy, erotic, sensual, and insatiable.
A very creative expression.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022

Wow! Thank you for vividly describing what I felt, as I pondered the exact word choice for this work. Frankly, I enjoyed it!
As always, I greatly appreciate your commentary.

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent short and sweet poem. You sure got a lot of sensuality in just a few words. The artwork is perfect for the subject of your writing. I see this is a contest entry so I wish you all the luck in the world.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022

Awesome! Thank you, prettybluebirds. I appreciate your thoughtful review. Thanks for taking time to read, review and rate my work.

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

Wow! This provoked some steamy thoughts. I have to applaud you for your choice of brilliant words and your choice of artwork. Very well done! I wish you much success with the contest.

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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022

Awesome! Thank you, John. I certainly appreciate your review. Thanks for the encouragement. I always welcome your commentary.