Hush
Sensuality With Few Words24 total reviews
Comment from royowen
It's so true, there so many examples of people communicating in the less obvious ways, a sigh, a touch of the hand, a look, a physical movement, oh yes there are many ways of communication, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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It's so true, there so many examples of people communicating in the less obvious ways, a sigh, a touch of the hand, a look, a physical movement, oh yes there are many ways of communication, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Roy. I appreciate your thoughtful and supportive remarks.
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Most welcome
Comment from Mia Twysted
This piece is so intimate. It pulls you in as if you are the one leaning in for that first kiss or for a passionate kiss. The picture is beautiful and goes with the piece.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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This piece is so intimate. It pulls you in as if you are the one leaning in for that first kiss or for a passionate kiss. The picture is beautiful and goes with the piece.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Thank you, Mia. I appreciate your insight and thoughtful review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Okay entry for the 1-7-1 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The whole presentation and poem are disturbing. I don't think children should be serialized like a grown woman.woman. There are a lot of perverts who get off by pictures like this one. I would look for a different picture and change the poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Okay entry for the 1-7-1 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The whole presentation and poem are disturbing. I don't think children should be serialized like a grown woman.woman. There are a lot of perverts who get off by pictures like this one. I would look for a different picture and change the poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your perspective, Gypsy Blue Rose.
Comment from Terry Broxson
Very good for this contest it is: Hot! Hot! Hot!... I think we use to say something like that back in the day. Good luck in the contest. I think in a very few words, you captured the essence of the challenge, good job! Terry.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Very good for this contest it is: Hot! Hot! Hot!... I think we use to say something like that back in the day. Good luck in the contest. I think in a very few words, you captured the essence of the challenge, good job! Terry.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Thank you, Terry. This piece of writing has evoked all types of responses. I appreciate the time you took to read, review and rate my work.
Comment from Marienkiefer
Hello,
Love the colours you chose for this poem, which is,
-High degree of sensuality,
Entrancing. Visual and body languagen also effectively portrayed.
Currents of energy flow through the words and their suggestions. An energizing and tantalizing trigger to the senses, is how I would describe your poem.
All the best.
Pp
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Hello,
Love the colours you chose for this poem, which is,
-High degree of sensuality,
Entrancing. Visual and body languagen also effectively portrayed.
Currents of energy flow through the words and their suggestions. An energizing and tantalizing trigger to the senses, is how I would describe your poem.
All the best.
Pp
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Thank you, Marienkiefer. I have received a wide array of responses "reactions" to this work. In summary, I guess it speaks to just how powerful words are, especially when they are paired with images.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Hush ' , is short, succinct and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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' Hush ' , is short, succinct and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Hey there, duchessofdrumborg! Thanks for your review and kind comments.
Hey there Seville Bates, you're more than welcome.
Bless you, the Duchess
Comment from Wendy G
Very different, short and sweet, and you ha don't used a contemporary image to accompany your interesting words. Sending best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Very different, short and sweet, and you ha don't used a contemporary image to accompany your interesting words. Sending best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Thank you, Wendy G. I appreciate the time you took to read, review and rate my work.
Comment from Cristine22
Wow! This is so effective. I love how so few words can tell such a clear story and evoke such emotion. And the "hush" works so well in a work so short. Sometimes it's what you don't say that matters. Really great job!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Wow! This is so effective. I love how so few words can tell such a clear story and evoke such emotion. And the "hush" works so well in a work so short. Sometimes it's what you don't say that matters. Really great job!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Awesome! You truly have summed it up, Cristine22. I really appreciate the time you took to read, review and rate my work.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The image sure makes the poem enticing. Perhaps the words will capture the minute of desire when they look at the form of the lips and tongue. Rather a creative image of the lips.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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The image sure makes the poem enticing. Perhaps the words will capture the minute of desire when they look at the form of the lips and tongue. Rather a creative image of the lips.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Thank you, Rosemary Everson1. I really appreciate the time you took to read, review and rate my work.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written 1 71 poem. A great presentation. Photo is excellent and compliments your words well. Good luck in the contest. Very well done.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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This is a nicely written 1 71 poem. A great presentation. Photo is excellent and compliments your words well. Good luck in the contest. Very well done.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Thank you, Joanne Gill. I have received a wide array of reactions to this work. Some find it to be a bit too provocative. Thanks for your kind and thoughtful remarks.
