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Just

...with liberty and justice for all... ?

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Judgment makes the matter, citizens of America has to prove how much they are committed to the cause of the nation, country, people and honesty and grace for human and human order of living in all parts of the country with high commitment and loyalty to the constitution of the country; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2022


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Comment from Mia Twysted
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When you are informed you can make a better more educated decision. It is a shame that people assume they know all the facts without even trying to understand.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2022


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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the 1-7-1 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is beautiful. Good alliteration.
Of J word. Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2022


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Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
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It is so very difficult at times to find words to express ones thoughts and to impact others. Your "Just" and statement "Judging blindly is never Just", is a powerful statement. One that I would embrace to be taken seriously and applied when dealing with others. So often we are to quick to judge others by what we hear or think is the situation rather than giving the benefit of the doubt to waiting, observing and listening to more than one side of the actual happenings. So often reality is very different. That is why I am a converted believer in the quote " The Truth shall set you free." Nothing is more rewarding than knowing that you are operating your responses truly as a result of "Truth" rather than your perception or someone elses' perception of "Truth that you support. All the best to you in the contest. Well done!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2022


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    Thank you for this wonderful review and generous rating. I am so pleased to have someone see the depth I tried to put in this little entry. Thank you.
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    You are welcome!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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"If my people who are called by my name will humble themselves and pray and seek my face and turn from their wicked ways, I will hear from heaven and will forgive their sins and restore their land." (2 Chronicles)

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2022


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Comment from Earl Corp
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I don't think justice is blind. I think it judges by the golden rule of he who has the gold makes the rules. Some of people get the best justice money can buy. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2022


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Comment from Bill Schott
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This 1-7-1, Pray for America, is well called for and sorely needed as the society deals with old wounds festering and bleeding anew. The change is coming, and it will be rough.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2022


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Comment from LisaMay
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I admire how you have expressed your thoughts of integrity in this poem, and the poetic ability of using both meanings for 'just', rather than merely repeating the same word as other contest entrants have done.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2022


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Comment from jessizero
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The double meaning of the word "just" was clever. Your statement was true, and it's impressive that you managed to express your point in just 9 syllables. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2022


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Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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I saw this challenge earlier and wondered how you could make it work. You've done a tremendous job here - and using the same word to begin and end the poem ties it all together in a surprising way. Well done!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2022


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