Springtime Celebration
A Kouta9 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Daffodils are so beautiful in springtime. Just the lightness of your poem and the expression of a gala highlights the evening's scenarios. Kids love to smell the lakeside's beauty.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Daffodils are so beautiful in springtime. Just the lightness of your poem and the expression of a gala highlights the evening's scenarios. Kids love to smell the lakeside's beauty.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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My daffodils are drooping because the weather turned cold. Many thanks for sharing my poem. Rod
Comment from jessizero
I like the comparison between daffodils and children at a party. Your imagery is lovely. Thank you for choosing to share this here, and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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I like the comparison between daffodils and children at a party. Your imagery is lovely. Thank you for choosing to share this here, and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much, jessizero, for sharing my Kouta. I am especially pleased you like my comparison.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Likening infants to bright, lively daffodils bobbing in the sun is an excellent piece of description. Even the fascination with water would hold true. Kate xx
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Likening infants to bright, lively daffodils bobbing in the sun is an excellent piece of description. Even the fascination with water would hold true. Kate xx
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for sharing and praising my Kouta, Kate.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I'll keep this short as the Kouta is, and appreciate the picture and your words. ..............................................................................................................................
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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I'll keep this short as the Kouta is, and appreciate the picture and your words. ..............................................................................................................................
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Tom, for sharing my Kouta.
Comment from Val Crisson
I really like this Kouta prompt poem. Is it Japanese Short Form??? None the less, children are so much like daffodils. Full of energy and light and ready "romp" and dance. Very nice piece.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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I really like this Kouta prompt poem. Is it Japanese Short Form??? None the less, children are so much like daffodils. Full of energy and light and ready "romp" and dance. Very nice piece.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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I am so pleased you like my Kouta and my analogy to boisterous children. The sponsor says it is a Japanese form related to the haiku.
Comment from Cecilia R
Your poem about daffodils works well in this style. Your words show creativity and created an image. I enjoyed it. The picture is a perfect match for the theme. Good luck on the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Your poem about daffodils works well in this style. Your words show creativity and created an image. I enjoyed it. The picture is a perfect match for the theme. Good luck on the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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I am so pleased you like the imagery in my poem and the photo. Many thanks, Cecelia, for sharing.
Comment from moongirlwriter
It is so disappointing to me when the pic doesn't match the words but when our creator makes daffodils such a vibrant yellow. . .how can any camera or artist even begin to touch the richness of color? It always feels like liquid sunshine to me. I really love your poem, the words flow beautifully. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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It is so disappointing to me when the pic doesn't match the words but when our creator makes daffodils such a vibrant yellow. . .how can any camera or artist even begin to touch the richness of color? It always feels like liquid sunshine to me. I really love your poem, the words flow beautifully. Best of luck.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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I am delighted you like my Kouta and the words I chose. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Springtime Celebration, finds the scene blanketed with daffodils which shine brightly, sing sweetly, and help the viewers feel great serenity. Nice.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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This poem, Springtime Celebration, finds the scene blanketed with daffodils which shine brightly, sing sweetly, and help the viewers feel great serenity. Nice.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Bill, for sharing and praising my Kouta.
Comment from royowen
Some great scenic affirmation here, the thought of a "crowd" of daffodils gathered together to celebrate is a very cool idea, and really like the way you've written, this, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Some great scenic affirmation here, the thought of a "crowd" of daffodils gathered together to celebrate is a very cool idea, and really like the way you've written, this, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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I am so pleased you like the way I wrote my Kouta, Roy. Many thanks for sharing.
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Well done
