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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Alexandra the superhero strikes out in defense of the underdogs. She is really impressive in this chapter. I thought Cord lived at his parent's house, but you mention "his place" in this section. He goes home at night? Really enjoyed this chapter and learning just what a dirty dog Pat is.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
    Cord is staying with his parents right now because of the cattle issues. But yes, he does have his own place. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
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This is a really great episode this week Barbara, the real Alexandra stand up please, she is completely au fait with the real man this sleaze bucket is all about now, and I'm sure he'll do time, as some Hollywood producers do. Beautifully written Barbara, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Business to tend to(o) 2: anything(,) I need to pick up. 3: adjust her navy blue(,) 4: Deja (vou) Vu? 5: one of the most (prestige) law firms. Prestigious?

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
    Thank you for the help. I appreciate it. When I read it I read it like it's supposed to be not what it says.
reply by royowen on 25-Apr-2022
    Well done
Comment from judiverse
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Pat Rogers is a real jerk. He's certainly been using his position to prey on women. Alexandria is on to him. It shows a lot of nerve on her part that she confronts him. Just a thought--Alexandria has been practicing law in New York and is licensed to practice there. I don't know what the procedure is like in Texas, but she would have to get a license there to practice if she wants to sue Pat. I don't know how long it would take to get that license, but I believe the have to pass the bar in that state. If she gets her Texas license, she may have herself an entirely different type of practice. It should be more rewarding to help these women than to work for that large corporation. judi

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
    It will be taken care of. I made sure of that. Some lawyers can practice law in numerous states. I thought of it too. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by judiverse on 25-Apr-2022
    You're very welcome. As I said, I don't know what the law in Texas is. It sounds like Alexandria may have found a new career for herself. judi
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
    We can only hope.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Lots of surprises in this story. I cannot imagine what kind of character this person is; He should be put behind bars being he was doing unlawful acts in his office.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
    He is horrible and will actually get worse. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
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Here's your six for letting that creep catch it from Ali. Great job as always, and I didn't see any errors. I always look forward to your posting days. Enjoy the rest of your Sunday. Shirley

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
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I had no trouble at all with the small town sharing of information. It rang true to me in the dialogue. I didn't know that Ale was such a firebrand, though. Wow! This was an exciting chapter, Barbara!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
    There's two Ali's, she needs to just figure herself out. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Judy Lawless
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This is another excellent chapter, Barbara. You've demonstrated Alexandra's other personality, one of a strong, take charge woman. I assume her licence allows her to practice in Texas?

I'm very familiar with small-town living and we do share many facts about our personal lives. lol I've lived in cities where I never ever saw my neighbours.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
    Thank you for the kind review. Ali will have to discover the real her.
reply by Judy Lawless on 25-Apr-2022
    You?re most welcome, Barbara.
Comment from Sankey
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Wow! This was really something! She really "put the cat amongst the pigeons" today! I really enjoyed this and looks like Alex might make a name for herself in the local area. Not that she needs it. No spags today!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
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I love it when 'wise guys' are taught the lesson that their ignorant actions are the results of being or at least acting like idiots. Men who take advantage of women are among the most ignorant. They obviously have not yet learned that when a woman has had enough and decides to fight back, your battle is against someone so powerful that you will not only lose, you will be heavily damaged in the process.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
    Pat will get what he deserves but it won't be easy. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
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Well, this was another well written chapter for the story. That Pat is beyond repair. He's horrible. Good on Ali to show him the cards. I can't wait to be reading on Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
    Thank you for the kind review. Yes, Pat is horrible.