Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Begin Again
This chapter deserves a standing ovation and then some!! I love how she steps up to the plate and starts swinging.
Can't wait to read more!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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This chapter deserves a standing ovation and then some!! I love how she steps up to the plate and starts swinging.
Can't wait to read more!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Again, thank you for the support.
Comment from RGstar
I read the other day and wanted to come back to it a second time, as the upcoming cremation service for my son has my thoughts and emotions locked. Yet, I found a god piece of writing here. Relaxed , it was as natural as being there. Good flowing scenes, as well I am glad the romance did not develop speedily as thought when reading the first couple of chapters.
Nicely balanced, the scenes outplay with an everyday feel of normality, as if a given point in someone's life.
A very well done.
Six stars deserving, for my last one was saved for this.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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I read the other day and wanted to come back to it a second time, as the upcoming cremation service for my son has my thoughts and emotions locked. Yet, I found a god piece of writing here. Relaxed , it was as natural as being there. Good flowing scenes, as well I am glad the romance did not develop speedily as thought when reading the first couple of chapters.
Nicely balanced, the scenes outplay with an everyday feel of normality, as if a given point in someone's life.
A very well done.
Six stars deserving, for my last one was saved for this.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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I'm honored.
Comment from Sanku
it felt great to read Ali ripping into that sleazy man. I think she is going to shake the small town in her quest for justice. Cordero and Ali are two injured souls and they will naturally gravitate towards each other...
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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it felt great to read Ali ripping into that sleazy man. I think she is going to shake the small town in her quest for justice. Cordero and Ali are two injured souls and they will naturally gravitate towards each other...
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from JoannaN
I like the dialogue. What would be a nice idea, would be spending more time in the point of view of one particular person - for instance Alexandra - in order to let the reader know her even more.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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I like the dialogue. What would be a nice idea, would be spending more time in the point of view of one particular person - for instance Alexandra - in order to let the reader know her even more.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the suggestion.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed this post, as it well written, wildly descriptive and well presented.
I appreciate the author notes, they filled in some of the gaps.
I too have lived in both environments and I echo your sentiment.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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I enjoyed this post, as it well written, wildly descriptive and well presented.
I appreciate the author notes, they filled in some of the gaps.
I too have lived in both environments and I echo your sentiment.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the kind review and the understanding.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello BARBARA.WILKEY,
It's an interesting piece of Romance Fiction.
Alexandra's encounter with Pat is worth enjoying as well as inspirational!
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
"Opening her purse, Alexandra took out a handful of cards. "Lisa, here's my card. Call me tomorrow, and we'll sue him. I have a feeling you aren't his only victim. If you can think of other possible victims, please give them my card. I'm going to put a stop to this."
Thumbs Up!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Hello BARBARA.WILKEY,
It's an interesting piece of Romance Fiction.
Alexandra's encounter with Pat is worth enjoying as well as inspirational!
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
"Opening her purse, Alexandra took out a handful of cards. "Lisa, here's my card. Call me tomorrow, and we'll sue him. I have a feeling you aren't his only victim. If you can think of other possible victims, please give them my card. I'm going to put a stop to this."
Thumbs Up!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the support.
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Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from lancellot
When Alexandra wanted the SUV to go into town. I immediately knew she would run into a sleazy rapist, evil man. And it didn't take long. (actually the hour is too long. They would have been done with four quickies by then.)
You write well, but things are too telegraphed and formulaic. Things just happen at the right time, in the right way, out of the blue and in a stereotypical way. I'm not saying you can't do that. It's your book. Just something to consider.
Morning comes early around here."(Ã?)
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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When Alexandra wanted the SUV to go into town. I immediately knew she would run into a sleazy rapist, evil man. And it didn't take long. (actually the hour is too long. They would have been done with four quickies by then.)
You write well, but things are too telegraphed and formulaic. Things just happen at the right time, in the right way, out of the blue and in a stereotypical way. I'm not saying you can't do that. It's your book. Just something to consider.
Morning comes early around here."(Ã?)
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Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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I removed the extra character. I wonder if it was there all last week. I'm sure you already know what's going to happen in the rest of this novel. If you have time, I'd like your verson of it, so I know if you're correct. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Oh, the small town tongue waggers can rattle off more stories than the Washington Post and New York Times combined. And most times, there isn't much truth in anything they say. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Oh, the small town tongue waggers can rattle off more stories than the Washington Post and New York Times combined. And most times, there isn't much truth in anything they say. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you for sharing. I see you understand small towns. LOL
Comment from John Ciarmello
I loved this chapter, Barbera. It was satisfying to see Ali rip into Pat. This is well written as usual. I enjoyed the fact that Ali is a strong stand-alone girl. Thank for the read.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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I loved this chapter, Barbera. It was satisfying to see Ali rip into Pat. This is well written as usual. I enjoyed the fact that Ali is a strong stand-alone girl. Thank for the read.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, Ali is strong, just not in relationships.
Comment from eliz100
This is another great chapter. You have surprised me with the plot twist. It looks like Ali is going to be a champion for women. Yeah! The picture matches the story. I don't think I mentioned how I appreciate the large font.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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This is another great chapter. You have surprised me with the plot twist. It looks like Ali is going to be a champion for women. Yeah! The picture matches the story. I don't think I mentioned how I appreciate the large font.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
