Comment from Elaine Chiodi

Excellent

This is a tough contest; but your words, image, and hope shine through. This should be a winner. All my good luck wishes go along with my vote... ...ec

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2022

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the Nature 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery is great.

I love the little chick's.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2022

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello author, your poem is filled with good imagery.
I especially liked:
as they peck to life
(good play on the word, peck)

Well chosen artwork. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2022

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine presentation of spring as these chicks hatch and enjoy new life, a magical time of year and you brought the scene to our eyes here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2022

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

"Little feather balls" is a great phrase for newborn chicks. It made me "awwww." Thanks for sharing this adorable poem. Best wishes to you, and keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2022

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

What a delightful entry for this contest. Great picture you have chosen, and your words so aptly describe it. Precious little chickens making their way in to the world. Hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2022

Comment from BeckyMann

Excellent

They sure do! And who doesn't love the springtime, with these little critters running around! Kind of crazy to think they have to find their own way out. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2022