Yellow Rose
five/seven/five poem14 total reviews
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I really like this well written poem. The yellow background helps to highlight your words about spring. The last line is my favorite,"Winter's grip is broken. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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I really like this well written poem. The yellow background helps to highlight your words about spring. The last line is my favorite,"Winter's grip is broken. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a beautiful 5-7-5. The thought of summer's magic through a yellow rose. Your words are warming along with the touching artwork. I wish you much success with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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This is a beautiful 5-7-5. The thought of summer's magic through a yellow rose. Your words are warming along with the touching artwork. I wish you much success with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review
Comment from royowen
Yes it can break the grip of winter, except we're entering it, though still in the throws of autumn, we are about to enter winter here, beautifully written Val, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Yes it can break the grip of winter, except we're entering it, though still in the throws of autumn, we are about to enter winter here, beautifully written Val, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to review.
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Welcome
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Nature 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery is great.
I love yellow flowers.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Excellent entry for the Nature 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery is great.
I love yellow flowers.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you, I am a fan of yellow flowers, also. In fact I grow yellow roses. Also, I loved your jiyu-shi entry "Bevy of Doves. What an interesting form. I will have to try to write one. Have a great day.
Comment from Lynar
What I liked was the crystal clear image of the yellow rose. The water droplets made it glisten. May I suggest that text and frame be black that will make it look rich! The image mesh nicely with your words. (winter broken and spring is in) It did make me feel refresh inside with beauty. Excellent.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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What I liked was the crystal clear image of the yellow rose. The water droplets made it glisten. May I suggest that text and frame be black that will make it look rich! The image mesh nicely with your words. (winter broken and spring is in) It did make me feel refresh inside with beauty. Excellent.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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What a lovely useful review, they have become rare. I agree with your corrections, but I need to wait a bit before I can implement them. I am pretty hopeless at "advanced options" Thank you for the positive suggestions.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Roses are my favourite flowers and they have a habit of lifting our spirit and reminding us of the beauty in nature, a fine scene painted here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Roses are my favourite flowers and they have a habit of lifting our spirit and reminding us of the beauty in nature, a fine scene painted here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Might be true for you but daffodils are the first to spring forth even four months or more before the rose appears where we live. Good picture. Good luck.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Might be true for you but daffodils are the first to spring forth even four months or more before the rose appears where we live. Good picture. Good luck.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Roses bloom in California in May and April. Daffodils bloom earlier. None the less, thank you for a positive review.
Comment from Regina Elliott
Lovely concise poem. My late
husband spent his adolescence in Nacogdoches,
Texas. I don't remember what the yellow rose connection exactly is to Texas, but,
occasionally he gave me
yellow roses. This nice poem
just gave me fond memories.
Thank you. Blessings.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Lovely concise poem. My late
husband spent his adolescence in Nacogdoches,
Texas. I don't remember what the yellow rose connection exactly is to Texas, but,
occasionally he gave me
yellow roses. This nice poem
just gave me fond memories.
Thank you. Blessings.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this review
Comment from Bill Schott
This nature 5-7-5, Yellow Rose, has the right setup and makes me think of one of these beautiful flowers in Texas that I am gonna see; nobody else could miss her not half as much as me. : )
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This nature 5-7-5, Yellow Rose, has the right setup and makes me think of one of these beautiful flowers in Texas that I am gonna see; nobody else could miss her not half as much as me. : )
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describing the rose and your heart.
-A good concluding line showing the impact of the rose and spring.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describing the rose and your heart.
-A good concluding line showing the impact of the rose and spring.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Pam, as always it's a review well respected.
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You are very welcome.
