Comment from Regina Elliott

Exceptional

Very touching and grand poem, pookietoo! My grandchildren are 10, and
almost 8. I love being a Nana.
I hope you're enjoying your
Sunday. Keep penning.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022

It deserved much more than one vote!

reply by Regina Elliott on 24-Apr-2022

Yes, it sure did. I will keep a closer eye
on your contest entries. Blessings to
you. ~

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022

Ok!

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022

Please do!!!

Comment from Symph0ny

Average

Although I enjoyed this poem as was a nice depiction of age progression in a child, The format was difficult to follow in the first stanza which is supposed to be what keeps me interested. But it was the later stanzas that got my attention. Other times you ended with a repeated word as the rhyme which didn't fit. Such as having two "tear(s)" in the last stanza, or rhyming "child" with "child" three times.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022

I didn't rhyme child with child. My poem is beautiful!!!

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022

I fixed my errors!

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem.
You met the prompt requirements - your poem is for a child, and what a little cutie he is!
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)

For consideration, I noticed a couple of typos you may want to fix before the booth opens...

'so meek and so meek and so mild.' - remove the first 'so meek and'
'In threr months you'll be three,' - three, not threr

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022

Thanks!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine tribute to this little boy who has a beautiful smile and the love in these words is shining through all your verses, I enjoyed the rhymes and the dedication, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022

Thanks;