Eden's Fruit
Bananas are universally loved5 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Enjoyed your banana poem and yes, it is versatile and I always like to put it into smoothies. I had to laugh at the banana seat comment - never been a grape bike seat ever! Congratulations on the win!!
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
Lol. Enjoyed your banana poem and yes, it is versatile and I always like to put it into smoothies. I had to laugh at the banana seat comment - never been a grape bike seat ever! Congratulations on the win!!
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thanks so much Helen, you're always so generous with your praise. I think I tied with four other people for first place, or was it second? In any event, there were some good entries. I don't look at as many contest entries as I should. This site is addictive, and I actually have a life away from it. Next month I'll be going to Southeast to get the boat ready for the fishing season. I can't say I'm excited about it. The food situation there is iffy. My friend paid $10.24 for a head of lettuce! Incredible. The only way in or out of town is by plane or ferry, or I could take my boat to Juneau, but that's a six hour trip and the weather can be touchy. I understand that the only airline there in Hoonah raised the rates to $140.00 to go one way to Juneau. It's a twenty minute flight. I can go from Anchorage to Juneau for $182.00. I hate being ripped off. Anyway, for as long as I'm down there, I won't be doing any writing. I have a laptop, but no internet, and I don't want to mess up the laptop with a lot of spam or whatever. I use it primarily for my GPS. When I get back I'll have massive reading to do no doubt. Oh well. OK gal. Thanks again, you're a gem.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment from sunnilicious
Congratulations on winning the contest and bringing home the blue ribbon. Exceptional work :)
Bananas are yummy. I could eat them everyday. I wish they'd last longer. They all seem to ripe up at the same time.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
Congratulations on winning the contest and bringing home the blue ribbon. Exceptional work :)
Bananas are yummy. I could eat them everyday. I wish they'd last longer. They all seem to ripe up at the same time.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Hello Sunni,
thanks so much for your kind review and comments. You're right, they seem to ripen all at once. I know how to make them ripen quicker, but don't know how to slow down the process. Eat them faster I guess.
Have a blessed day gal.
Tom
Comment from MissMerri
This is so cute and clever and I was glad to see the first-place ribbon on it. I liked how you were addressing the banana all through the poem, reminding it why he was so great. My husband loves bananas so he will like this poem too. I am sorry I haven't been reviewing your work. The days have been full of other things, and FanStory gets left out much of the time. I will do better now that I'm getting notified. Congratulations on the well-deserved win. MM
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
This is so cute and clever and I was glad to see the first-place ribbon on it. I liked how you were addressing the banana all through the poem, reminding it why he was so great. My husband loves bananas so he will like this poem too. I am sorry I haven't been reviewing your work. The days have been full of other things, and FanStory gets left out much of the time. I will do better now that I'm getting notified. Congratulations on the well-deserved win. MM
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much Adonna for the fine review. I understand all too well about the days being full. It's easy to get caught up in this site and let other things go, something I can't really afford to do as fishing season is coming upon me soon.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment from giraffmang
hi there,
bravo! this is a very fun piece and quite frankly one of the better poems I've read in the last few weeks or so or any description. I hope this does well in the competition.
GMG
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
hi there,
bravo! this is a very fun piece and quite frankly one of the better poems I've read in the last few weeks or so or any description. I hope this does well in the competition.
GMG
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your positive feed back.
Have a great day.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A well rhymed and metered poem filled with the joys of the humble banana and I loved the journey and reckon this is the best poem I have read for the contest so I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
A well rhymed and metered poem filled with the joys of the humble banana and I loved the journey and reckon this is the best poem I have read for the contest so I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review. Have a great day.