Comment from aryr

Excellent

A wonderful but saddened senrye, Gypsy. I enjoyed the picture of the waves. Your words held a great deal of sadness and remorse. They showed the remorse of your words. Blessed be n hugs!

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022

Thank you very much, Aryr. It's always good to hear from you and I appreciate your kind reviews and feedback. May you have a wonderful day. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 23-Apr-2022

You are so welcome, Gypsy, blessed be n hugs!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Those regular events that are no longer happening or not the same because of the missing loved one, feel "broken." The regular waves are broken and reflect the broken regular walks on the beach.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022

yes, you got it :)

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, Helen. I always appreciate it, never take your kindness for granted. Bless you.

Gypsy hugs

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022

yes, you got it :)

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, Helen. I always appreciate it, never take your kindness for granted. Bless you.

Gypsy hugs

reply by lyenochka on 23-Apr-2022

Appreciate you, too!! 💖

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, I have made a few of those
walks myself...it's quiet...and all
you hear is the music of the waves...

I love your poem my sweet friend...
and love the picture...when I was a kid...
those waves were fun to play in...
very well written...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, Linda. Love you too.

Gypsy hugs

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, Linda. Love you too.

Gypsy hugs

reply by l.raven on 23-Apr-2022

sooooo very welcome you...love xxoo

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

An interesting poem- where a walk on the beach triggers memories of a place once shared- waves indicating the intensity - possibly negative- emotions- of the story of the apparent separation- good job

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022

waves represent the broken relationship

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, AP. I always appreciate it, never take your kindness for granted.

Gypsy hugs

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022

waves represent the broken relationship

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, AP. I always appreciate it, never take your kindness for granted.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Gypsy,

Good pairing of colors and illustration for this Senryu post. You leave me with the feeling that their relationship may now be breaking and on the rocks (-;

Mark

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, Mark. Yes, the relationship was broken like the waves.

Gypsy hugs

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, Mark. Yes, the relationship was broken like the waves.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from K. Lang-Slattery

Excellent

Beautiful poem in so few words. I am always captured by ocean imagery so I especially like the final line and all it means. Thanks also for the definition of Senryu and how it is different from Haiku.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, K Lang. I always appreciate it, never take your kindness for granted. Bless you.

Gypsy hugs

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, K Lang. I always appreciate it, never take your kindness for granted. Bless you.

Gypsy hugs