A Repetitive Rebuke of Death
Fear Not Death or the Doom It Brings20 total reviews
Comment from Darkhorse555
the black and white picture really suits the mood of your words, and the golden sunshine began to shine in hope we all live within its charity, embracing the Word ending on a beautiful note
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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the black and white picture really suits the mood of your words, and the golden sunshine began to shine in hope we all live within its charity, embracing the Word ending on a beautiful note
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Thanks for your insight and thoughtful review. I appreciate you taking time to read, review and rate my work.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your poem brings about many things; there is hope, love, trust, and faith. I think you have covered each of these descriptions in your poem. God is eternal and everlasting.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Your poem brings about many things; there is hope, love, trust, and faith. I think you have covered each of these descriptions in your poem. God is eternal and everlasting.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Thanks for your insight and thoughtful review, Rosemary. I appreciate the time you took to read, review and rate my work.
Comment from June Sargent
I fully agree with your sentiments. With his sacrifice Christ erased the sting of Death. Therefore we need not live life fearing Death but embrace life filled with hope. Spring is an especially a hopeful time - when Jesus was resurrected - and when life returns in full bloom. Thank you for the reminder.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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I fully agree with your sentiments. With his sacrifice Christ erased the sting of Death. Therefore we need not live life fearing Death but embrace life filled with hope. Spring is an especially a hopeful time - when Jesus was resurrected - and when life returns in full bloom. Thank you for the reminder.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Thank you so much, June. I appreciate your thoughtful review. It's great to connect with believers in God's Kingdom. Thanks for taking the time to read, review and rate this work.
Comment from R.B.Bunn
This was a nice read. The repeated line is a powerful one to repeat. Death is inevitable but that just makes life more precious to enjoy and embrace. At times, I could do a better job at that. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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This was a nice read. The repeated line is a powerful one to repeat. Death is inevitable but that just makes life more precious to enjoy and embrace. At times, I could do a better job at that. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Thank you, R.B. Bunn for a thoughtful and insightful review. I really appreciate the time you took to read, review and rate this work.
Comment from Bill Schott
This repetitive poem, A Repetitive Rebuke of Death, fills the page with praise for God, who has conquered death and allowed makind the grace of salvation. Nice.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This repetitive poem, A Repetitive Rebuke of Death, fills the page with praise for God, who has conquered death and allowed makind the grace of salvation. Nice.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Thanks for your thoughtful review, Bill Schott. You are absolutely right. I appreciate the time you took to read, review and rate this work.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
God has a plan for all of us. He bestows grace upon us so we can have everlasting life with Him. That is not to be feared. We just need to love and trust our Heavenly Father's plan. Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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God has a plan for all of us. He bestows grace upon us so we can have everlasting life with Him. That is not to be feared. We just need to love and trust our Heavenly Father's plan. Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Thank you Barbara for your thoughtful commentary. I appreciate the time you took to read, review and rate this work.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Those who dwell almost constantly on the end cannot possibly be happy and find peace. Your reverent, descriptive poem conveys a message about the only way to avoid dwelling on death, trusting in the One who defeated death, the Lord.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Those who dwell almost constantly on the end cannot possibly be happy and find peace. Your reverent, descriptive poem conveys a message about the only way to avoid dwelling on death, trusting in the One who defeated death, the Lord.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Thank you for your insightful comments. I appreciate the time you took to read, review and rate this work.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' A Repetitive Rebuke of Death ', is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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' A Repetitive Rebuke of Death ', is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Awesome! Thank you for your thoughtful comments, duchessofdrumborg. I appreciate the time to invest in reading, reviewing and rating my work.
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Awesome is hugs praise. For me it was an absolute pleasure.
the Duchess
Comment from Aussie
Your repetition poem speaks to the reader. 'There is no death tho' eyes grow dim. There is no death when I think on Him. I'll lean on Him forever, He'll forsake me never. Death is but a transition to real life. K xx
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Your repetition poem speaks to the reader. 'There is no death tho' eyes grow dim. There is no death when I think on Him. I'll lean on Him forever, He'll forsake me never. Death is but a transition to real life. K xx
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Aussie. I appreciate your thoughtful review and insight. Thanks for reading, reviewing and rating my work.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job expressing you thoughts and feelings
on death and eternity, Mystery Author. Your repeating line
fits in seamlessly. I like the image and the good use of rhyme.
You gave readers much to think about. Thanks, too, for the
notes.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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You did a great job expressing you thoughts and feelings
on death and eternity, Mystery Author. Your repeating line
fits in seamlessly. I like the image and the good use of rhyme.
You gave readers much to think about. Thanks, too, for the
notes.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Awesome, Jan! Thanks for your thoughtful review and insight. I appreciate the time you took to read, review and rate my work.
