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Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is a well-written poem but sad about the loss of timber from careless smokers. Wildfires each year destroy acres of prime woodlands due to man's carelessness both from cigarettes and global warming.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This is a well-written poem but sad about the loss of timber from careless smokers. Wildfires each year destroy acres of prime woodlands due to man's carelessness both from cigarettes and global warming.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, Mary. I always appreciate it, and never take kindness for granted.
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and idiots who toss their lit cigarete out of the car bother me bad; selfish morons. I think those who smoke no days with everything we know about how bad the are for you are moron's too; sorry if you smoke, but I had to say it
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and idiots who toss their lit cigarete out of the car bother me bad; selfish morons. I think those who smoke no days with everything we know about how bad the are for you are moron's too; sorry if you smoke, but I had to say it
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem, Mike.
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Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful yet sad Cinquain Tanka, Gypsy. I certainly appreciate the picture which sadly shows the burned trees. Your words were definitely right on, some mindless dickhead thoughtlessly created this disaster. We passed more than enough burn sites when we drove our trailer through parts of Nevada, definitely California and the southern corner of Oregon. Such sadness. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This was a wonderful yet sad Cinquain Tanka, Gypsy. I certainly appreciate the picture which sadly shows the burned trees. Your words were definitely right on, some mindless dickhead thoughtlessly created this disaster. We passed more than enough burn sites when we drove our trailer through parts of Nevada, definitely California and the southern corner of Oregon. Such sadness. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, Aryr. I always appreciate it, and never take kindness for granted. My daughter lives in Grass Valley, North California, they have huge fires. It's horrible. Blessed be.
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy, I agree that is is horrible. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is creative as well as inventive. I have a hard time keeping up with the different types of poetry as it is and you go and invent another, lol. You have a magical style all your own. I enjoy reading you. Best, John C
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This is creative as well as inventive. I have a hard time keeping up with the different types of poetry as it is and you go and invent another, lol. You have a magical style all your own. I enjoy reading you. Best, John C
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, John. I always appreciate it, and never take kindness for granted. Actually, I recently created two new forms LoL
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Comment from lyenochka
It's shocking how careless some people are with the environment. The wild fires have caused so much devastation to the wildlife, plants and human neighborhoods.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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It's shocking how careless some people are with the environment. The wild fires have caused so much devastation to the wildlife, plants and human neighborhoods.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Yes, it's true. Here in California we have a lot of fires :( Thank you for the excellent review.
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