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Wisdom15 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
We should all listen to the wise old owl, as it doesn't take anymore effort to be kind, than to be nasty. Now, we just have to convince the rest of the world. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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We should all listen to the wise old owl, as it doesn't take anymore effort to be kind, than to be nasty. Now, we just have to convince the rest of the world. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Thanks Ric. You have had to be strong and present a hard exterior. But you are a softie at heart and that'sgood. Hugs. Jen.
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Don't tell any one . . . you'll spoil my image. Hugs back at ya! Ric
Comment from Cecilia R
Your short poem has a good message. The artwork is very complimentary. This form with only 15 syllables takes a powerful message to bring notice to its words. You accomplished that with your writing.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Your short poem has a good message. The artwork is very complimentary. This form with only 15 syllables takes a powerful message to bring notice to its words. You accomplished that with your writing.
Cecilia
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much. Jen
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Owl is allegorical, the important message for survival, living is kindness, we should try ever to live in kind for it is important for living peacefully every day; man invites all causes of losses and sorrows in want of kindness; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Owl is allegorical, the important message for survival, living is kindness, we should try ever to live in kind for it is important for living peacefully every day; man invites all causes of losses and sorrows in want of kindness; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Tha ks
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is very good advice and I love the title and line above it. The owl looks expressive and brings the message home.
I agree that we all need to be kind. I try to be as kind as possible in all my dealings with people or animals.
As you say this is an important message and one that a lot of folks just don't get.
One suggestion I might add is that the print in the body of the presentation is hard to read. Other than that I find nothing wrong with this poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Have a wonderful day,
Jesse
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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This is very good advice and I love the title and line above it. The owl looks expressive and brings the message home.
I agree that we all need to be kind. I try to be as kind as possible in all my dealings with people or animals.
As you say this is an important message and one that a lot of folks just don't get.
One suggestion I might add is that the print in the body of the presentation is hard to read. Other than that I find nothing wrong with this poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Have a wonderful day,
Jesse
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Tha m you so much Jesse for the wlnderful review, much appreciated. I am so happy thst you like it. Jrn.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Jenintorre a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 15 syllable Poem contest entry, you executed it well on the syllable count and I liked the message. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Hello Jenintorre a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 15 syllable Poem contest entry, you executed it well on the syllable count and I liked the message. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much. Jen.
