One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mark Schardine
I greatly enjoyed this poem with its seemingly capricious observations which in fact may be quite accurate, and not merely something in the eye of a beholder.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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I greatly enjoyed this poem with its seemingly capricious observations which in fact may be quite accurate, and not merely something in the eye of a beholder.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem. I appreciate it, Mark.
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Comment from aryr
This was great and all by your hand, created by you, SIX FEET UNDER, Gypsy. I enjoyed the picture immensely, it was dark and dreary like your words. Your words showed the need for rain. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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This was great and all by your hand, created by you, SIX FEET UNDER, Gypsy. I enjoyed the picture immensely, it was dark and dreary like your words. Your words showed the need for rain. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Aryr, thank you for the kind words and review. It's always good to hear from you. Hugs and Blessings, my friend.
Gypsy
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So very welcome, Gypsy, blessed be n hugs!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I love this poem. Such a creative format that creates a delightful pace that flows effortlessly down the page. This is well written and well presented. Thank you for sharing your talent.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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I love this poem. Such a creative format that creates a delightful pace that flows effortlessly down the page. This is well written and well presented. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, K.L. :) you are very kind. I enjoy writing free verse and Japanese poetry. I appreciate your lovely review and kind feedback.
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Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your "Six Feet Under" poetic form. You're an expert in show us a lot with very short lines and you painted a detailed picture for us. I see hope with the hope in the rain coming to the thirsty mountain!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Enjoyed your "Six Feet Under" poetic form. You're an expert in show us a lot with very short lines and you painted a detailed picture for us. I see hope with the hope in the rain coming to the thirsty mountain!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Helen :) you are very kind. I enjoy writing free verse and Japanese poetry. I appreciate your lovely review and kind feedback, big sister.
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Comment from AP Apgar
Interesting new form- congratulations!- in this poem you have achieved the goal of the new form with the syllable count - sometimes word choice (soft-hard) takes away from the flow and confuses the intended direction- I fight this constantly-
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Interesting new form- congratulations!- in this poem you have achieved the goal of the new form with the syllable count - sometimes word choice (soft-hard) takes away from the flow and confuses the intended direction- I fight this constantly-
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Theodore McDowell
Loved this poem. the first line was startling: beyond the beyondness. The only word that broke the easy flow of the poem was "serendipitously." Besides that, wonderfully drafted.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Loved this poem. the first line was startling: beyond the beyondness. The only word that broke the easy flow of the poem was "serendipitously." Besides that, wonderfully drafted.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your feedback, I'll take a look. I appreciate your review and kind words.
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Comment from royowen
A very lovely 6 line x 6 line post, somewhere over the rainbow, seems to be the theme, I love the concept, this is where the kingdom of the impossible lives, I'd have to say, it's geographically one explain the location of Heaven better, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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A very lovely 6 line x 6 line post, somewhere over the rainbow, seems to be the theme, I love the concept, this is where the kingdom of the impossible lives, I'd have to say, it's geographically one explain the location of Heaven better, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your feedback. I appreciate your review and kind words.
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Most welcome