In Our Midst
All around us5 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
John,
This can be true of the slinking, then attacking preditor, as in the artwork you chose. But, it can also be about any unexpected challenge in life. Every once in a while we get a feeling of deja vu which always brings shivers.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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John,
This can be true of the slinking, then attacking preditor, as in the artwork you chose. But, it can also be about any unexpected challenge in life. Every once in a while we get a feeling of deja vu which always brings shivers.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
John
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My pleasure, John.
Joan
Comment from Susan Newell
Lord,
This is a terrific entry for the contest. It seeks to express that sixth sense that warns us of the intangible and unexplainable danger that lurks . . . somewhere. Great job!
Sue
dejavu ==> deja vu (technically italicized because it is a foreign expression)
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Lord,
This is a terrific entry for the contest. It seeks to express that sixth sense that warns us of the intangible and unexplainable danger that lurks . . . somewhere. Great job!
Sue
dejavu ==> deja vu (technically italicized because it is a foreign expression)
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
John
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:-)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a lovely five line poem, and the picture is perfect for it, too. We have to look hard to see what is there, just like we would do if we were looking for those 'we aren't alone' shadows. I wonder if they really are out there!! I enjoyed your poem, my friend. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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That was a lovely five line poem, and the picture is perfect for it, too. We have to look hard to see what is there, just like we would do if we were looking for those 'we aren't alone' shadows. I wonder if they really are out there!! I enjoyed your poem, my friend. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
John
Comment from juliaSjames
Eerie. You build up the suspense line by line engaging the senses, until the cryptic ending. The alliteration and consonance add to the overall effect. This tiny poem makes a powerful impact. Excellent work.
Stay safe and blessed, Julia
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Eerie. You build up the suspense line by line engaging the senses, until the cryptic ending. The alliteration and consonance add to the overall effect. This tiny poem makes a powerful impact. Excellent work.
Stay safe and blessed, Julia
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
John
Comment from jusylee72
deja vu Yes, instincts are important . It is what we need to be aware of
Your poem seems to imply that we need to listen to our instincts and respond. WE need to recognize the danger , example putin, and not let the evil spread.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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deja vu Yes, instincts are important . It is what we need to be aware of
Your poem seems to imply that we need to listen to our instincts and respond. WE need to recognize the danger , example putin, and not let the evil spread.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
John
