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Ode to Typewriter

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Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a shower of praises on a typewriter, which has become synonymous with the protagonist writer.

The work highlights encomiums showered on a typewriter for making it possible for the protagonist to become a writer.

The work earns its texture through its effective use of imagery, onomatopoeia, and alliteration.

Excellent work. Bravo.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
    Thank you!
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 18-Apr-2022
    Remain Blessed.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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I have to ask, do you really still write on one of these antiques? I can't imagine, but I wouldn't mind having one in my office to act as my "muse".
It's nice to see a poem that gives due respect to one of the tools of our trade. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
    Thank you! No, I write on notebook papers and on the computer.