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Power To The Pen Of Poetry

A meandering monorhyme

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Comment from Anne Johnston
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Very well done on this. You have found lots of rhyming words to use do describe how a poet feels and the time and effort that is put in on each one. Hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
    Thanks very much for your positive review. I was lucky enough to win the contest with this poem.
reply by Anne Johnston on 20-Apr-2022
    Congratulations on your win.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
    Thank you very much Anne.
Comment from jessizero
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This is a great monorhyme poem! And, yes, we all want to win. I never win, but I haven't given up hope. As you said, "our writer's dreams are always free."

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
    Thanks very much for your positive review. I was lucky enough to win the contest with this poem.
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your Monorhyme writing prompt entry, you executed it well. You really ran with it. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
    Thanks very much for your positive review. I was lucky enough to win the contest with this poem.
Comment from Bridge
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A fun poem but we can identify with it. I loved reading it and very well written. I'm very impressed with you rhyming so many lines. However I'll be honest and I personally feel the -ly words don't rhyme perfectly. All the best in the contest.
With regards


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 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
    Thanks very much for your positive review (with reservations about the rhyming). I was lucky enough to win the contest with this poem.
reply by Bridge on 20-Apr-2022
    Congratulations on your win.
    With regards
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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What a great job you've done with this poem - it just slides off the tongue (I always read poetry aloud) and your pen certainly did have power on this one. Funny, with a lot of FanStory truths thrown in. I really liked it - good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
    Reading poetry aloud is the best way to appreciate it I feel. Thank you so much for this generous review.
Comment from Carlos' girl
Exceptional
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Wow. This poem here is spot on. The metre and the rhyme are both superb. Very well done. It has a nice ending too. Good job and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
    Thank you so much for this terrific review and your good wishes!
reply by Carlos' girl on 18-Apr-2022
    My pleasure
Comment from Sanku
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It is a clever poem for this contest. You have made excellent use of monorhyme to write about 'writing' a monorhyme. well done .all the best for the contest.

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 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
    Thanks very much for your supportive comments and good wishes!