Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

That sounded like fun. I bet you have some nice memories. Well thought out. Clearly written. Good artwork choice. Better short poem. Nice work.

Have a great week :)

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Those are precious and fun times when little ones can enjoy being in the rain and experience the wonder of water and splashing about, complete carefree. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022

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Comment from L. Kalere

Excellent

Very succinct, but relatable. Those were wonderful days when we couldn't wait to put on our boots and jump into puddles. Well done... I love nostalgia.
Linda

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2022

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Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This brings back such good memories. One day it rained so much that my sister and I put on our bathing suits and played in the driveway. They were precious times, like the ones you described. I also like the picture you selected to accompany the poem. Best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2022

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