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Comment from aryr
The picture and the video were very special, Gypsy. I really enjoyed your words of the Imayo Poem, they showed the grief and despair of a mother left with the burial of her son. No mother should have to deal with that. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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The picture and the video were very special, Gypsy. I really enjoyed your words of the Imayo Poem, they showed the grief and despair of a mother left with the burial of her son. No mother should have to deal with that. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Aryr. I hope you are having a wonderful week . Blessed be <3
Gypsy hugs
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I am thank you. You are so very welcome, Gypsy, blessed be n hugs.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Marival, I also saw that and like you I cried. It's horrendous what is going on in Ukraine. How man can be so evil is quite beyond me. It's a beautiful poem you've written about what happened to that poor woman. Un abrazo, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Hi Marival, I also saw that and like you I cried. It's horrendous what is going on in Ukraine. How man can be so evil is quite beyond me. It's a beautiful poem you've written about what happened to that poor woman. Un abrazo, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 17-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Ulla,
Thank you very much for the excellent review and pretty stars. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like this poem- it is very heart felt- bringing up lots of deep emotion from this real life tragedy- independently- I might suggest a few more traditional ways of phrasing -like " on the horizon
'Don't cry' - 'howls with' - sadness hangs over the world - that was completely avoidable- good Poem thanks
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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I like this poem- it is very heart felt- bringing up lots of deep emotion from this real life tragedy- independently- I might suggest a few more traditional ways of phrasing -like " on the horizon
'Don't cry' - 'howls with' - sadness hangs over the world - that was completely avoidable- good Poem thanks
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I like it just the way it is.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
"Gray Smoke in the Horizon"
I read different piece about the little boy Olek.
And how that many people were hiding out in the subways as the bombings were causing much death.
I believe he was only four years old but the video you posted stayed he was as on an adult?
Anyway you look at it there's only losers when it comes to war.
And when it's happening it affects the whole world so it's war against humanity!
Well posted.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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"Gray Smoke in the Horizon"
I read different piece about the little boy Olek.
And how that many people were hiding out in the subways as the bombings were causing much death.
I believe he was only four years old but the video you posted stayed he was as on an adult?
Anyway you look at it there's only losers when it comes to war.
And when it's happening it affects the whole world so it's war against humanity!
Well posted.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Your poem is so moving and I don't think I can even watch the video because I know I'd be crying, too. It's so horrific. There's no reason for this attack and I hope Putin can be stopped soon!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Your poem is so moving and I don't think I can even watch the video because I know I'd be crying, too. It's so horrific. There's no reason for this attack and I hope Putin can be stopped soon!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Helen, Yes, you shouldn't watch it. It broke my heart but you can hear the way she was crying so deep sounded like a howl. That is the best way I can put it. It wasn't a regular cry. I can imagine I would do the same if my son was killed right in front of me.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
btw... my oldest granddaughter, Bella, got covid. :( but she has been vaccinated and she is so young and healthy, I think she will be okay. Maybe if you can keep her in your prayers. I am too.
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Okay, saying a prayer for Bella now! May the Lord bless her with full and quick healing without any lingering side effects!! 💖💖🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Thank you very much, Helen! I appreciate it.
Comment from robyn corum
M.,
How horribly, horribly tragic. That's just ONE MORE in the VERY long list of travesties in this unnecessary and narcissistic war led by an eglomanic.
The pain and heartache he's causing is incredible. Though I am not familiar with this form, you've done a great job using vivid language to bring these moments to life.
Thanks so much!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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M.,
How horribly, horribly tragic. That's just ONE MORE in the VERY long list of travesties in this unnecessary and narcissistic war led by an eglomanic.
The pain and heartache he's causing is incredible. Though I am not familiar with this form, you've done a great job using vivid language to bring these moments to life.
Thanks so much!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Robyn, thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Goosey Gander
I think that you got the vibe for your poem just right. spot on. I think I'm gonna cry! that's such a heartfelt poem, I love the poem, but I kind of hate what it's about; it's so sad!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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I think that you got the vibe for your poem just right. spot on. I think I'm gonna cry! that's such a heartfelt poem, I love the poem, but I kind of hate what it's about; it's so sad!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a sad write and the people of Ukraine are suffering terribly just now and your poem tells the story here, so many innocent people losing their lives here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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This is such a sad write and the people of Ukraine are suffering terribly just now and your poem tells the story here, so many innocent people losing their lives here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
