Caveman Capers
Olden Days6 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The picture and your words combined like the fixings for an apple pie. Delectably tasty. Good luck in this contest. I don't know if you'll win but
I LIKE YOUR ENTRY.
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The picture and your words combined like the fixings for an apple pie. Delectably tasty. Good luck in this contest. I don't know if you'll win but
I LIKE YOUR ENTRY.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
Comment from lancellot
Stone age life
with caveman and wife
leads to strife
This is very good and the presentation with the Flintstones really seals it.
Some would argue that it does not have to be stone age, but any age and that strife would be there.
Good idea.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Stone age life
with caveman and wife
leads to strife
This is very good and the presentation with the Flintstones really seals it.
Some would argue that it does not have to be stone age, but any age and that strife would be there.
Good idea.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Thanks for your review. It does seem that the stone age has transferred to the modern age
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this famous couple bring to life the husband and wife team and I could hear Barney calling Wilma! He he he, much enjoyed and good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Ha ha ha, this famous couple bring to life the husband and wife team and I could hear Barney calling Wilma! He he he, much enjoyed and good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Thanks for your review. I have always loved the Flintstones.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Good cartoon is a perfect companion to your few lines. Of course, your rhyme scheme adds to the pleasure of reviewing the same. My guess this situation happens now too. LOL
The initial cap in line two is a mistake? IMHO the first line does not need it either.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Good cartoon is a perfect companion to your few lines. Of course, your rhyme scheme adds to the pleasure of reviewing the same. My guess this situation happens now too. LOL
The initial cap in line two is a mistake? IMHO the first line does not need it either.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nicely done. Haven't seen Fred and Wilma Flintstone for many years. Writing to the prompt was really good, and the rhyming was a nice touch. This should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Nicely done. Haven't seen Fred and Wilma Flintstone for many years. Writing to the prompt was really good, and the rhyming was a nice touch. This should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Thanks for your review. I have always loved the Flintstones.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You did a good job characterizing Fred and Wilma,
and their relationship.
-I was always entertaining.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You did a good job characterizing Fred and Wilma,
and their relationship.
-I was always entertaining.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
