chocolate Lava Cake
Make it in a crockpot. Yum!3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Leann,
This poem provides a strong image of the cake and its contents actions. Also how the cake and its partaker interact. I like the personification of the the filling of the cake in the last line.
Hope it did well in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend and Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page or you can go to Amazon.com and search The Interloper Joan Pechter.
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Hi Leann,
This poem provides a strong image of the cake and its contents actions. Also how the cake and its partaker interact. I like the personification of the the filling of the cake in the last line.
Hope it did well in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend and Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page or you can go to Amazon.com and search The Interloper Joan Pechter.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am enjoying this contest as I am learning about all these new desserts, and here is an old favourite, anything with chocolate and I am hooked, a mouth watering treat here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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I am enjoying this contest as I am learning about all these new desserts, and here is an old favourite, anything with chocolate and I am hooked, a mouth watering treat here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thank you. It is so delicious! I can eat the whole entire crockpot full. LOL
Comment from Eunice Amero
Your count is right. It made my mouth water. Im soon making me some chocolate pudding. You did a good job. It will be hard to pick a winner.. you keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Your count is right. It made my mouth water. Im soon making me some chocolate pudding. You did a good job. It will be hard to pick a winner.. you keep up the good work.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Thank you especially for your kind comments. Hugs and blessings.
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You are so welcome.