Freedom
A long walk through hell into heaven.5 total reviews
Comment from Susan Newell
Yard,
I waited to review this until I had a six. In a way, we are all working our way through the obstacle course called life to reach that most satisfying freedom of all, when we leave behind these frail bodies and rejoin our Creator.
Sue
I believe you need an apostrophe in your last line. ==> FREEDOM'S
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Yard,
I waited to review this until I had a six. In a way, we are all working our way through the obstacle course called life to reach that most satisfying freedom of all, when we leave behind these frail bodies and rejoin our Creator.
Sue
I believe you need an apostrophe in your last line. ==> FREEDOM'S
Comment Written 17-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Susan. The six is very much appreciated. (:-)))
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I really loved your poem, but I need to say that I have missed you. I have my tea ready, but nothing really great to get involved with to actually enjoy it. Please I don't mean any slight to your poem. It's great and thank you for posting it.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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I really loved your poem, but I need to say that I have missed you. I have my tea ready, but nothing really great to get involved with to actually enjoy it. Please I don't mean any slight to your poem. It's great and thank you for posting it.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Barbara. No slight taken.
As it is said, life gets in the way. Haven't had much time to finish the epilogue. It is coming, you'll be the first to know.
Yard
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very nice poem, very lyrical, and with a desolate picture showing just what those seeking freedom in America must pass through. You might want to change these: heaven(')s and everyone(')s.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Very nice poem, very lyrical, and with a desolate picture showing just what those seeking freedom in America must pass through. You might want to change these: heaven(')s and everyone(')s.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Carol. Your insight and review is always appreciated.
Yard
Comment from Ric Myworld
I almost never use my sixes for poetry no matter how good it is. I'm a prose guy and so are most of the people I read. But sometimes, things just hit a spot that I cannot deny. I had saved this six all week, which seldom happens, for something special. I'm glad I had it left. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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I almost never use my sixes for poetry no matter how good it is. I'm a prose guy and so are most of the people I read. But sometimes, things just hit a spot that I cannot deny. I had saved this six all week, which seldom happens, for something special. I'm glad I had it left. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Yea!!!!! It's much appreciated. I'll try and send out more prose for the Prose Guy (;-)
Comment from prettybluebirds
I have been there and done that. Sometimes it is hard to admit that someone is using you for their own gain, but it happens every day. I prefer rhyming poetry like this one and enjoyed reading it. Nicly done.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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I have been there and done that. Sometimes it is hard to admit that someone is using you for their own gain, but it happens every day. I prefer rhyming poetry like this one and enjoyed reading it. Nicly done.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Thank you, PB. Your review is much appreciated.
