Unintelligible (acrostic sonnet)
Name poetry contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well, you did what was needed to make the acrostic work but I wouldn't buy a ticket on the train where you traveled to compose this ditty of a work. Had fun, I guess, and if so not a mistake.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2022
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Well, you did what was needed to make the acrostic work but I wouldn't buy a ticket on the train where you traveled to compose this ditty of a work. Had fun, I guess, and if so not a mistake.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2022
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Tom. Yeah, that train went off the tracks a little. Haha. I appreciate the stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from SimianSavant
I'll bet money that this anonymous entry is written by the same person who won the 20th anniversary contest. Ha. I'll have to check after to see. You had a lot of great lines in here, like the nudist's underwear. One of my brothers is visiting me and just saw your piece, and that line got a grin out of him. Nice work.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2022
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I'll bet money that this anonymous entry is written by the same person who won the 20th anniversary contest. Ha. I'll have to check after to see. You had a lot of great lines in here, like the nudist's underwear. One of my brothers is visiting me and just saw your piece, and that line got a grin out of him. Nice work.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2022
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I enter so many of these dumb contests I don't even know if I was in that one or not. Lol. Thank you for the awesome review and fat sixer, H. I just came up with the dumbest stuff I could think of for whatever line I was on and rolled with it. The hardest part was finding a 14 letter word to make something humorous out of. When this one came up I just had to use it. I appreciate the great rating, friend. Thanks again.
Comment from Susan Newell
Mystery writer,
I would say your sonnet accurately reflects the meaning of your chosen word. I received a great deal of enjoyment from reading it. I particularly liked "Electrons favor eels that live on land." Good luck in the contest.
Sue
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Mystery writer,
I would say your sonnet accurately reflects the meaning of your chosen word. I received a great deal of enjoyment from reading it. I particularly liked "Electrons favor eels that live on land." Good luck in the contest.
Sue
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for the great review, Sue. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked my silly take on the contest.
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Most welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like an upside down wonderland of nature gone barmy! You made me smile and I love the line "Let kittens pay for crimes that they commit" and "I bought a nudist's unused underwear" a complete bonkers write filled with oddments that just made this whole poem work a treat, not sure Shakespeare would approve, but you have the metre and syllable count and there is something about this write that I just cannot help liking. I have just one six left and it has to be yours, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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This sounds like an upside down wonderland of nature gone barmy! You made me smile and I love the line "Let kittens pay for crimes that they commit" and "I bought a nudist's unused underwear" a complete bonkers write filled with oddments that just made this whole poem work a treat, not sure Shakespeare would approve, but you have the metre and syllable count and there is something about this write that I just cannot help liking. I have just one six left and it has to be yours, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Dolly. Yeah, I was just in one of those moods. Haha. I dearly appreciate the kind comments and your last six, D. I'm glad you liked my silly take on the prompt. Have yourself a wonderful upcoming weekend and thank you again.
