Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Very good presentation. Like your poem. You are indulging in daydreams or fantasies about something greatly desired: the experiences seem to keep you dreaming.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2022

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

I try to write what I dream of as I wake or even if disturb sufficiently in the dark on a pad I keep on the nightstand. Also, I carry a mini recorder when awake just in case a memory leaks forward while I wake..

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2022

Comment from Pam (respa)

Exceptional

-Nice image and presentation.
-A good topic, effective imagery, and rhyme.
-I like the line about "etching a picture"
and "tiptoes creep."
-The last two lines make a good conclusion
about the nature of dreaming, and a
very good concluding phrase,
"it's dreamtime I yearn."
-This is a very good entry, and
I hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022

Thanks for your review and the six stars. Glad you like the etching line, my favourite as well.

reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Apr-2022

You are very welcome, and thanks for sharing about the line.

Comment from juliaSjames

Excellent

Very well written rhymed acrostic for the contest. Your choice of word illumines the origin of dreams and how ephemeral they are. Yet they fascinate and we're always trying to recall them and comprehend their meaning.

Best of luck in the voting booth

Stay safe and blessed

Julia

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022

Thanks for your review. I can never remember my dreams. Hope that means they were good.

Comment from E. Denison

Excellent

Very nice acrostic here, mystery writer. It appears to meet all the requirements of the contest, and the imagery you employ (both in the verse and in the paired image) are lovely. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022

Thanks for your review Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You described dreaming so perfectly in your fine acrostic, I wish you luck with the contest, I always try to remember my dreams and sometimes it is impossible, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022

Thanks for your review. I can never remember my dreams.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

You did a great job with the prompt and guidelines. I love your acrostic poem. Dreaming is a great subject for a poem. Thanks for sharing this here. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed