Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Paul,
This is a well done poetic retelling of Christ's passion in abab quatrains. It reminds us what He went through for us to be free form sin and also to live in a way to join Him in Heaven.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Easter.
Joan

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022

Thanks, Joan. It's always good to hear from you. Happy Easter to you, also.

reply by dragonpoet on 14-Apr-2022

You're welcome, Paul.
Joan

Comment from Mama Baer

Excellent

Dear Paul, I appreciate you posting this thought-provoking piece about Easter, and our individual standing with our Savior. Your rhyme scheme flows beautifully and is packed with history and teachings. Thank you for sharing, and sending Easter wishes your way.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022

Thanks, Mama Baer. Right back at you with the Easter wishes.

Comment from WriterHeather

Excellent

This poem is well written and tells the story very well. I think the Easter bunny aspect is cool, but this is important for kids to know as well. Hope you have a great Easter.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022

Thanks, Heather. You are right. The Easter Bunny is important, too.

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore

Excellent

This is a well written and emotional poem. It is clear to see that your faith means the world to you and is unmovable. Your writing flows naturally and creates a gentle pace which compliments the sentiment .

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022

Thanks, KL. It took some time to pump this one out.

Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

HI Paul, it truly is an amazing story told
my sweet friend...and no matter how many times
I hear or read it...I cry...

they showed it on the screen in my church...the
cd they chose tore your heart out...every one in
there was crying...a night I will never forget...
it told of pain never seen...

Paul your poem is amazing to the true story...it should be
hanging in church on this very special day...

Thank You for your Easter gift to FanStory...

I love your poem sweet guy...and love your verse to
the story told...very well written...and your picture says it all...He died for us to save our sins...God Bless...
love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022

Thanks, Linda. I don't know if it is the same one, but I have watched "The Passion of the Christ", and it was almost too much to bear. You are too kind in your review.

reply by l.raven on 15-Apr-2022

I think that was the same one...
and your right...it was almost too much to
bear...and now whenever I just think
about what I saw in the movie Paul...I cry...
just from the thought of the pain Jesus went
through for us...to save us from sins...how much He loves us...your poem was amazing...you should frame it...and your so very welcome my sweet friend...love xxoo

Comment from Cathy M

Excellent

You told the whole adult life of Jesus in this poem and did it with elegance. Your word choices were spell binding, just as his story is. Thank you for sharing this Faith poem.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022

Thanks, Cathy. It is always a pleasure to retell this amazing story.

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

Great piece you've entered for this particular contest. The perfect time for a faith poetry contest. Best of luck in the contest and God bless my friend.
Steve

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022

Thanks, Steve. This time of year is always inspiring.

reply by Neonewman on 14-Apr-2022

Agreed!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Paul, This is a very beautiful and very well written true poem you have penned for the faith contest. The art work you chose went well with your words also. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022

Thanks, Teri. It took me a while to put this one together.

reply by Teri7 on 13-Apr-2022

I am so glad you did. It was a blessing to me!

Comment from Raul1

Exceptional

I think that God in Jesus Christ erases all of our sins and it is important to believe in faith of God. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022

Thanks, Raul. Good to hear from you.

reply by Raul1 on 13-Apr-2022

You're welcome!

Comment from Gina Schneller

Excellent

Beautiful. I really enjoyed your work. Beautiful picture as well to go with it. Words flow nicely. Thank you so much for sharing with us all. Have a nice Easter too!

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022

Thanks, Gina. Tis the season.