Easter
The greatest story ever told.48 total reviews
Comment from Sarah Tummey
A fantastic retelling of the Easter story, and brought up-to-date at the end as well. The line about the dice being tossed didn't seem to flow too well (perhaps too many syllables), but I can see why you included it. Personally, I would have ended with the verse about the martyrs giving their lives for Him. That was particularly powerful.
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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A fantastic retelling of the Easter story, and brought up-to-date at the end as well. The line about the dice being tossed didn't seem to flow too well (perhaps too many syllables), but I can see why you included it. Personally, I would have ended with the verse about the martyrs giving their lives for Him. That was particularly powerful.
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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I checked the syllable count, and it seems to be okay. Thanks for the review.
Comment from J. P. Olesen
Hi, Paul,
That's a lengthy and remarkably thorough poem. Very nicely done! If there are any flaws, I didn't see them. To say that you are an accomplished poet, is an understatement. I doubt I could compose a poem of half its quality in a thousand years. Best of luck in the contest!
Kindest regards,
J. P.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Hi, Paul,
That's a lengthy and remarkably thorough poem. Very nicely done! If there are any flaws, I didn't see them. To say that you are an accomplished poet, is an understatement. I doubt I could compose a poem of half its quality in a thousand years. Best of luck in the contest!
Kindest regards,
J. P.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Thanks, J. P. You are way too kind in your remarks, and probably way too modest in your talent.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
This is faith poetry in the highest. It reminisces his unfolding and presentation to Israel, which whirled up envy among the clergy and predisposed his crucifixion.
The work highlights his incrimination, crucifixion and resurrection, which afforded his disciples the empowerment of the holy spirit that enabled them withstand death and to preach the gospel to the rest of the world.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes reminiscent of the coming and saving grace of the Messiah.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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This is faith poetry in the highest. It reminisces his unfolding and presentation to Israel, which whirled up envy among the clergy and predisposed his crucifixion.
The work highlights his incrimination, crucifixion and resurrection, which afforded his disciples the empowerment of the holy spirit that enabled them withstand death and to preach the gospel to the rest of the world.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes reminiscent of the coming and saving grace of the Messiah.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thanks, Lloyd. I've got to get a larger hat size. Your words are too kind.
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Remain Blessed and keep on flourishing without any hindrance in Jesus name.
Comment from Heather Burroughs
Amen! This is wonderfully written. Those that don't believe can read your poem and will know and feel His presence. Best of luck with your entry in the upcoming contest. Many blessings to you
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Amen! This is wonderfully written. Those that don't believe can read your poem and will know and feel His presence. Best of luck with your entry in the upcoming contest. Many blessings to you
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thanks, Heather. Excellent comment about the nonbelievers.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
With excellence of rhyme and meter you presented the story of Jesus from triumphal entry in Jerusalem through crucifixion and resurrection and His word sent throughout the world up to His second coming.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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With excellence of rhyme and meter you presented the story of Jesus from triumphal entry in Jerusalem through crucifixion and resurrection and His word sent throughout the world up to His second coming.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thanks, Verna. A story worth retelling.
Comment from Eternal Muse
A great history of Easter and Christ's resurrection. Excellent message.
You tell the story of this great holiday with great detail, and I love your imagery, visuals and presentation.
This would make a great contender in the contest, I wish you luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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A great history of Easter and Christ's resurrection. Excellent message.
You tell the story of this great holiday with great detail, and I love your imagery, visuals and presentation.
This would make a great contender in the contest, I wish you luck in the booths.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thanks, EM. We'll see how it goes.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Paul,
I like your telling if the Easter Story.
Those must have been some awesome times when Christ walked the Earth.
Great work, Paul
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Paul,
I like your telling if the Easter Story.
Those must have been some awesome times when Christ walked the Earth.
Great work, Paul
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thanks, Cindy. They were a lot more awesome than the present time.
Comment from Rosita Smedvik
This conveyed so much. It's a poem but an entire story. I have yet to try a poem myself yet. This was so well done, so full of content and depth. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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This conveyed so much. It's a poem but an entire story. I have yet to try a poem myself yet. This was so well done, so full of content and depth. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thanks, Rosita. Give it a shot. You might have a knack for it.
Comment from bob cullen
The real story of Easter in verse told poetically. This is very well done. Your skill as a poet is obvious and your belief as a Christian is equally as clear.
I really enjoyed this post.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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The real story of Easter in verse told poetically. This is very well done. Your skill as a poet is obvious and your belief as a Christian is equally as clear.
I really enjoyed this post.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thanks, Bob. It seemed like a good time of year to bring this one out.
Comment from karenina
Good Friday is a time of reflection and prayer. This is a reverent accounting, in rhymed quatrains, filled with faith and true to the testament in the Bible. Your final quatrain reminds each of us of the sacrifice made to save us from eternal damnation. Peace be with you! I so appreciate the spiritual offering ~ a time to yet again consider the truest meaning of Good Friday and the joy of the Resurrection soon to be celebrated. Happy Easter!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2022
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Good Friday is a time of reflection and prayer. This is a reverent accounting, in rhymed quatrains, filled with faith and true to the testament in the Bible. Your final quatrain reminds each of us of the sacrifice made to save us from eternal damnation. Peace be with you! I so appreciate the spiritual offering ~ a time to yet again consider the truest meaning of Good Friday and the joy of the Resurrection soon to be celebrated. Happy Easter!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2022
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Thanks, Karenina. It was a challenge to put this story into rhyme.
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You did a great job with that!