Getting Rid of Granddad
The money-hungry grandson...13 total reviews
Comment from Debra White
Hah, Lisamay! This made me laugh! I know it's all in good fun, but I reckon that some people really would go to great lengths to receive their inheritance early!
Congratulations on winning the contest with this good-humoured, well written post.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
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Hah, Lisamay! This made me laugh! I know it's all in good fun, but I reckon that some people really would go to great lengths to receive their inheritance early!
Congratulations on winning the contest with this good-humoured, well written post.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2022
Comment from jessizero
I have a grandmother who is going to outlive all of us out of nothing but spite. I liked your poem. It was quite amusing, and it met the criteria well. Best wishes.
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I have a grandmother who is going to outlive all of us out of nothing but spite. I liked your poem. It was quite amusing, and it met the criteria well. Best wishes.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
Comment from Wendy G
Well done with smooth rhyme and you have certainly treated the serious topic with skilful humour. It is a fun read. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Well done with smooth rhyme and you have certainly treated the serious topic with skilful humour. It is a fun read. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Good Friday wishes to you Wendy.
Thanks for your review comments. This Granddad was a tough old feller against his avaricious grandson, who I hope fell in the pit himself.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Oh goodness, I wish nobody to die unless they are terminal ill. Ouch! Life is pretty precious. Even if the grandpa was rich, let him spend his cash; then you don't have to worry about his bank account.
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Oh goodness, I wish nobody to die unless they are terminal ill. Ouch! Life is pretty precious. Even if the grandpa was rich, let him spend his cash; then you don't have to worry about his bank account.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Getting Rid of Granddad, certainly proves that the geezer has the narrator driving himself to an early grave trying to eliminate him. Funny.
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This poem, Getting Rid of Granddad, certainly proves that the geezer has the narrator driving himself to an early grave trying to eliminate him. Funny.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
Comment from Gina Schneller
This is my favorite! You got my vote for sure! Artwork is perfect. Thank you so much for sharing with us all. Best of luck in your writing journey.
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This is my favorite! You got my vote for sure! Artwork is perfect. Thank you so much for sharing with us all. Best of luck in your writing journey.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the This is serious writing prompt contest. I like the presentation too.
Your poem is really funny, I love it.
Good luck in the contest.
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Excellent entry for the This is serious writing prompt contest. I like the presentation too.
Your poem is really funny, I love it.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
Comment from Karen Alexandra
I really enjoyed this poem. It flowed well and said things that many think but don's say! You are the villain but your adversary is a good match for your trickery and that is well portrayed in this poem. The imagery does the poem justice and sets you up for what you are about to read. Well done and thank you for submitting this for review. Karen
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I really enjoyed this poem. It flowed well and said things that many think but don's say! You are the villain but your adversary is a good match for your trickery and that is well portrayed in this poem. The imagery does the poem justice and sets you up for what you are about to read. Well done and thank you for submitting this for review. Karen
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your This is serious writing prompt entry, you executed it well, While killing someone for their money is no laughing matter, your wishes and attempts are quite humorous, your failure serves you right. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your This is serious writing prompt entry, you executed it well, While killing someone for their money is no laughing matter, your wishes and attempts are quite humorous, your failure serves you right. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
It is, may I say, dastardly funny and seriously wrong. Poor grandpa. Had he done anything wrong except live too long so you can't enjoy an inheritance that... may not be yours. ???
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It is, may I say, dastardly funny and seriously wrong. Poor grandpa. Had he done anything wrong except live too long so you can't enjoy an inheritance that... may not be yours. ???
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
