Love's way
A poem41 total reviews
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
This is a hot poem. And you definitely display some hot creative skills. Nevertheless, I was captivated from beginning to end. For, you have a way with displaying your words. Keep Writing
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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This is a hot poem. And you definitely display some hot creative skills. Nevertheless, I was captivated from beginning to end. For, you have a way with displaying your words. Keep Writing
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much for these terrific comments and a super comments, blessings Roy
Comment from Boogienights
Your poetry takes me to places I might never go ...and I thank you for that. I have read a little of the Bible, mostly old testament, but your words bring it more to life through your poetry. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Your poetry takes me to places I might never go ...and I thank you for that. I have read a little of the Bible, mostly old testament, but your words bring it more to life through your poetry. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much for these terrific comments and a super comments, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
A poem of faith travelling through a spiritual dark valley at times, but coming out again into the sunshine, victorious. As with "Footprints" we can be assured of His presence even when we feel alone.
Suggestion: Last stanza, second line, should read "Our prayer and love sustain us, and lead our hearts to sing" (not "leads")
Lovely writing.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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A poem of faith travelling through a spiritual dark valley at times, but coming out again into the sunshine, victorious. As with "Footprints" we can be assured of His presence even when we feel alone.
Suggestion: Last stanza, second line, should read "Our prayer and love sustain us, and lead our hearts to sing" (not "leads")
Lovely writing.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Thanks Wendy, for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Charity Stewart
Well written and moving. I do feel the absence of God's presence. I need Jesus. Dancing with the devil way to long. Your talent is off the charts. Every word was moving. Perfect.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Well written and moving. I do feel the absence of God's presence. I need Jesus. Dancing with the devil way to long. Your talent is off the charts. Every word was moving. Perfect.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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I?ve been genuinely trying to get hold of you, but I?m doing something wrong, is your country?s prefix +1? Mine is +61 Thank you for the thumbs up. Blessings Roy
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Yes it's +1
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Feel like I'm slowly dying.
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No, you?re not Charity, part of faith is simply stepping of a cliff, no literally of course, one step towards God, then He runs to you.
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Thanks charity.
Comment from E. Denison
Royowen - This is an excellent vignette of the path through faith, from sorrow to praise. I particularly like that you chose to use a dark background. I think even in the praise portion of faith, there is still darkness present. The rhyme and meter here are smooth, and overall the work reads as excellent commentary on the experience of faith. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Royowen - This is an excellent vignette of the path through faith, from sorrow to praise. I particularly like that you chose to use a dark background. I think even in the praise portion of faith, there is still darkness present. The rhyme and meter here are smooth, and overall the work reads as excellent commentary on the experience of faith. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thank so much for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading this spiritually dynamic poem. I find it admirable to place your faith so openly and honestly through your writing. I can tell your faith is strong and unyielding.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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I enjoyed reading this spiritually dynamic poem. I find it admirable to place your faith so openly and honestly through your writing. I can tell your faith is strong and unyielding.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thank so much for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from BethShelby
This is another beautiful poem. You ask the question why do you still weep but Christ wept because he was able to empathize with the suffering of others and if we weep for the same reason , what is wrong with that.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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This is another beautiful poem. You ask the question why do you still weep but Christ wept because he was able to empathize with the suffering of others and if we weep for the same reason , what is wrong with that.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thank so much Beth, for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
When I read this, I felt every emotion that faith gives us. When you love God with all your heart, soul and mind, the result is the joy that your poem explains.
As I too ask for God to strengthen my faith daily, I am a sinner and know that as the saying goes, 7 days without prayer, makes one weak. As always, your poem is beautiful!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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When I read this, I felt every emotion that faith gives us. When you love God with all your heart, soul and mind, the result is the joy that your poem explains.
As I too ask for God to strengthen my faith daily, I am a sinner and know that as the saying goes, 7 days without prayer, makes one weak. As always, your poem is beautiful!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thank so much Debi, for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Teri7
Amen!!! I needed this poem right now my friend. Thank you so much for sharing it. You used great descriptive and very true words and we are blessed to have the Holy Spirit with us always. I love the footprints and scripture. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Amen!!! I needed this poem right now my friend. Thank you so much for sharing it. You used great descriptive and very true words and we are blessed to have the Holy Spirit with us always. I love the footprints and scripture. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thank so much Teri, for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
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You are so welcome! Blessings, Teri
Comment from L. Kalere
I don't know how you do it, Roy, but you have the heart and soul of a true poet. Like others before it, your poem flows beautifully and clearly, and contains yet another wonderful message. Although you talk often about your faith it never sounds like you're preaching to, nor judging others. Thanks for sharing your wonderful gifts.
Linda
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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I don't know how you do it, Roy, but you have the heart and soul of a true poet. Like others before it, your poem flows beautifully and clearly, and contains yet another wonderful message. Although you talk often about your faith it never sounds like you're preaching to, nor judging others. Thanks for sharing your wonderful gifts.
Linda
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2022
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Thank so much Linda, for these fantastic comments and great review, blessings Roy
