Spring
An Acrostic/Loop for Spring19 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Kahpot, your did a really well on your Acrostic Loop poem.
It reads and flows well and is a timely springtime poem. Of
special note:
Nature unwraps many of God's great gifts
(This is so true.)
Well-chosen photo. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer
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Hello Kahpot, your did a really well on your Acrostic Loop poem.
It reads and flows well and is a timely springtime poem. Of
special note:
Nature unwraps many of God's great gifts
(This is so true.)
Well-chosen photo. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Spring
by kahpot
Excellent Acrostic/Loop for Spring. I love the presentation and the sound and rhythm of your words in meter. Spring is a beautiful season.
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Spring
by kahpot
Excellent Acrostic/Loop for Spring. I love the presentation and the sound and rhythm of your words in meter. Spring is a beautiful season.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
Comment from Gloria ....
How beautifully you have published this loop acrostic. It is a complex form and you have mastered it.
Your rhythm and sentiment go a long way to making a memorable write.
Many thanks for sharing. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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How beautifully you have published this loop acrostic. It is a complex form and you have mastered it.
Your rhythm and sentiment go a long way to making a memorable write.
Many thanks for sharing. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
What a beautiful tribute you have written for spring! The imagery of all the lovely things we associate with spring - the flowers, trees, birds, bunnies - each and every one of them is a gift wrapped in God's love. I enjoyed this acrostic loop - very well crafted!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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What a beautiful tribute you have written for spring! The imagery of all the lovely things we associate with spring - the flowers, trees, birds, bunnies - each and every one of them is a gift wrapped in God's love. I enjoyed this acrostic loop - very well crafted!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You are talented, kahpot, to be able to write both a loop poem
and acrostic in one complete poem. Your words read well
in both cases. The image, color scheme, and well-chosen
words fit together perfectly to create this uplifting poem.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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You are talented, kahpot, to be able to write both a loop poem
and acrostic in one complete poem. Your words read well
in both cases. The image, color scheme, and well-chosen
words fit together perfectly to create this uplifting poem.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much Jan, your encouraging and wonderful comments are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
I admire your loop form here, it is smooth and brings forth a picture of spring. "Indulge in wealth provided by nature" is a great line, nature indeed is full of real wealth. Excellent poem that makes the reader feel good.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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I admire your loop form here, it is smooth and brings forth a picture of spring. "Indulge in wealth provided by nature" is a great line, nature indeed is full of real wealth. Excellent poem that makes the reader feel good.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Wow! Thank you very much for your exceptional comments and stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from juliaSjames
Beautifully crafted acrostic loop. Spring is indeed the season that unwraps the gifts Nature has been preparing during the dormancy of winter.
Excellent progression and flow in this write.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Beautifully crafted acrostic loop. Spring is indeed the season that unwraps the gifts Nature has been preparing during the dormancy of winter.
Excellent progression and flow in this write.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Always welcome
Comment from Brett Matthew West
First off, a well crafted poem that combines two forms; an acrostic and a loop.
Speaks of how Spring is the season for fresh "regrowth".
Nature does indeed provide much wealth.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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First off, a well crafted poem that combines two forms; an acrostic and a loop.
Speaks of how Spring is the season for fresh "regrowth".
Nature does indeed provide much wealth.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, kahpot.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and good job with the loops.
-You paint a good word picture showing
the essence of spring.
-It is a beautiful time when
"Nature unwraps many of God's great gifts."
-Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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-Nice image and presentation, kahpot.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and good job with the loops.
-You paint a good word picture showing
the essence of spring.
-It is a beautiful time when
"Nature unwraps many of God's great gifts."
-Well done!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are welcome.
Comment from Cecilia R
You did an excellent job of following the pattern for this style of poetry. It flows well with a message that weave through the poem. I like your word selections and how they take the theme from small to large in scope. Great job.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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You did an excellent job of following the pattern for this style of poetry. It flows well with a message that weave through the poem. I like your word selections and how they take the theme from small to large in scope. Great job.
Cecilia
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
