A Take on Everlasting Life
Grow Where Planted36 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You made many valid points, Ann. I enjoyed reading your philosophy about life. What I found most was how each individual acts while alive determines if and how s/he will be remembered after they pass. You words were well thought out and organized well.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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You made many valid points, Ann. I enjoyed reading your philosophy about life. What I found most was how each individual acts while alive determines if and how s/he will be remembered after they pass. You words were well thought out and organized well.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank You so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate your time and your encouraging words. ann
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is deep and so true. We will only be remembered on this earth if there is someone left here to remember us. I enjoy these kinds of subjects. My son and I talk about these things constantly. I loved it. Well written and well thought out
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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This is deep and so true. We will only be remembered on this earth if there is someone left here to remember us. I enjoy these kinds of subjects. My son and I talk about these things constantly. I loved it. Well written and well thought out
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate your time and your encouraging words. I think it is important to discuss such subjects with our families and our friends. ann
Comment from Terry Broxson
Wow, you've been hiding all that smartness and philosophy under some bushel basket that needed more light! Good for you and good for us. One suggestion, consider dividing some of the paragraphs, I am thinking of Jay Squires "wall of words."
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Wow, you've been hiding all that smartness and philosophy under some bushel basket that needed more light! Good for you and good for us. One suggestion, consider dividing some of the paragraphs, I am thinking of Jay Squires "wall of words."
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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I'm thinking you are right! I will go back and split some of those walls of words. I really appreciate your very kind 6 stars, though not sure the essay was 'cooked quite long enough'. Thank you, Terry, always for your encouragement. ann
Comment from Shirley McLain
I wish I had a six to give you. I liked your words, and they carried so much truth. You did a great job, and I didn't see any mistakes. Enjoy the rest of your Sunday. Shirley
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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I wish I had a six to give you. I liked your words, and they carried so much truth. You did a great job, and I didn't see any mistakes. Enjoy the rest of your Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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If no mistakes, why a 4 star? Just curious - especially in light of your comments as to possibly deserving of six. Just let me know where I should improve the work to improve the rating. Thanks. ann
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That must have been a mistake, and I will correct it so you have your five stars. Have a great day. Shirley
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Thank you, Shirley. I appreciate it. ann
Comment from lyenochka
Loved your spiritual meditation, Ann! And what great advice from your Aunt Pearl, not to fight insomnia but to use it creatively! That's a gift to a writer! And then you delved into deep thinking about eternal life which Jesus promised to all who believe. I also think that since there's no time in Heaven, we will all be there with souls past, present, and future so no one will be grieving and watching a birth from afar. We're already there together. We just can't experience it on this side of eternity.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Loved your spiritual meditation, Ann! And what great advice from your Aunt Pearl, not to fight insomnia but to use it creatively! That's a gift to a writer! And then you delved into deep thinking about eternal life which Jesus promised to all who believe. I also think that since there's no time in Heaven, we will all be there with souls past, present, and future so no one will be grieving and watching a birth from afar. We're already there together. We just can't experience it on this side of eternity.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thanks for your insight -- I believe you and I agree on a significant level when it comes to the spiritual. I certainly agree with your picture of Heaven as you drew in this review. I am always humbled by 6 stars from someone whose writing I truly admire. Thanks again. ann
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed this well written and well crafted story. The dialogue reads authenticity and creates a smooth read. The topic is relatable and thought provoking. I think the message is a strong one that I hope your readers will receive.
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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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I enjoyed this well written and well crafted story. The dialogue reads authenticity and creates a smooth read. The topic is relatable and thought provoking. I think the message is a strong one that I hope your readers will receive.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate your time and your encouraging words. ann
