Comment from juliaSjames

Excellent

I enjoyed your endearing write. I've had several black cat companions but none with such a royal name. However, they have always looked regal. The most amusing experience with Oliver, the last of the line, was when he saw a flooded yard for the first time. He leapt down to investigate, and as soon as his paws touched water, made an amazing reverse jump to safety.

Thanks for sharing this fun cinquain, Debra

Stay safe and blessed,

Hugs

Julia

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022

I bet Oliver's reverse leap was a sight to behold!
Thank you for your lovely feedback, Julia :) I appreciate it...
Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A finely rhymed poem about this adorable cat, a sweetly indeed, cats can be noisy sometimes, I hear them at night outside my window, they scream like babies, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022

LOL! Not the noise I'd want to be hearing outside my bedroom at night!
Thank you for your kind feedback, Dolly :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from paige_a

Excellent

Hello, Debra! I just have to say that what you've got here is a lovely little poem. I thought it quite cute and quirky and fun, and enjoyed reading it very much :)

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022

Thank you so much, Paige :) I appreciate your lovely feedback! Best wishes, Debra

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Cute ekphrastic observations about a cat. I guess nosy is a good word for "curious" especially since you are limited to just two syllables. I like how you bookended the cinquain with the "nosy."

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022

Thanks so much, Helen :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem about the nosy cat! I recently used the name Nefertiti in a story, but I didn't know what it meant. Thanks for sharing the poem and enlightening me about the name. The picture you picked matches perfectly.

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022

Thank you so much Jessi, I appreciate your kind feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This cinquain, Just Curious, has the right setup and gives the cat its due as being felinely inquisitive as well as all the other idiosyncrasies we associate with cats.

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022

Thank you for your feedback - I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra :)