Stars Shine
Contest Entry3 total reviews
Comment from JLR
Poet, you executed this double Joesph Star with perfect adherence to the contest rules. Your complete stanzas did make a perfect and clear sense, and I wish you well in the booth.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
Poet, you executed this double Joesph Star with perfect adherence to the contest rules. Your complete stanzas did make a perfect and clear sense, and I wish you well in the booth.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed reading it. The picture is awesome, and a great
choice to pair with your words. Your syllable count is correct
per line, too.
May I suggest [I know your work, your choice.]
use a black background with a white font
make font size a bit larger
title-- Stars Shine
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Love the color scheme.
Title--Stars Shine
next to last line use them instead of it
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed reading it. The picture is awesome, and a great
choice to pair with your words. Your syllable count is correct
per line, too.
May I suggest [I know your work, your choice.]
use a black background with a white font
make font size a bit larger
title-- Stars Shine
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Love the color scheme.
Title--Stars Shine
next to last line use them instead of it
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you and thanks for your help. It looks better. Please check. Does it look good now?
Comment from Bill Schott
This Joseph's Star poem, Star Shines, has the proper formatting and suggests that there is power in those stars to alter what we feel needs changing. Let's wish then.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
This Joseph's Star poem, Star Shines, has the proper formatting and suggests that there is power in those stars to alter what we feel needs changing. Let's wish then.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you!