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Comment from karenina
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Congrats on your win! I miss some days and these slip pass me...

So glad the announcement of your contest win turned be back to this...

All your poems are winners Gypsy!

Karenina

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
    Karenina, thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy aka MariVal
    "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
reply by karenina on 01-Aug-2022
    I'm so sorry I've been stumbling about trying to catch all I miss as the days slip away from me with this illness or that grandchild's needs!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
    What illness? Don't scare me. Please let me know. I take care of my grandson full time and it's very hard to find the time to write and review. Don't worry about the reviews, there will always be more. Please take care of yourself, sweetie pie.

    Hugs!
reply by karenina on 02-Aug-2022
    Sorry! Didn't mean to scare you! I'm doing well for an old bird!
Comment from dragonpoet
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MariVal,
I like how the font color shows the colors of the sky and lake at the twilight described in this poem. This is good metaphor of the reflection along with good personification of the lake.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
    "Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
reply by dragonpoet on 24-Jul-2022
    You're very welcome, MariVal I like the quote which has proven true for me.
    Joan
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A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2022

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
    Thank you!
Comment from juliaSjames
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Love "soaks up twilight" It's absolutely delightful on so many levels. Just draws the reader into your write. Indigo is a great colour choice for the lake. Dark and mysterious. A little melancholy. You triggered my memory and I'm listening to Mood Indigo by Duke Ellington. LOL

Good luck in the contest.

Stay safe and blessed, Julia

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2022

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
    Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Julia. Blessings.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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I said this before, as well a having beauty in your words you have an artist eye to present your words. The image and haiku give a sense of calm and peace.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2022

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
    Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Mary.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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That is so cool! I liked the way you helped us see and feel the cooling colors of the indigo lake and how it absorbed / soaked up the twilight. Gorgeous picture, too!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2022

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
    Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Helen.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
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Interesting poem- good picture presentation- tells of a beautiful lake shifting in temperature as the sun sets at the end of the day- taking in and reflecting the twilight sky - good job

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Thank you very much for your review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
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I love the view of a sea horizon where the the horizon, the sea and the sky blend with each other, as if they are just one. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and review. I appreciate it.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Very (sic) nice post Gypsy!

Do like your (sic) coloring scheme and illustration for your verse. One can easily sense the cool twilight vision for your contest entry.

Mark

P.S. Congrats on your win.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Mark. Thank you very much for your time and review. I appreciate it.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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Good luck wishes in the Haiku Contest, Gypsy. I adored the picture. Your words capture the beauty of the lake, the calmness and serenity of it. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Aryr,

    Thank you very much for your time and review. I appreciate it.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 07-Apr-2022
    You are so very welcome, Gypsy, blessed be n hugs!