Comment from SimianSavant

Excellent

Nice use of puns. The title alone is brilliant. I keep forgetting to vote in these contests. The last time I saw one of your 18+ entries was the legendary contest where we both got muted for a couple weeks. This one finished without quite the same climax, but was still rather enjoyable.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022

Hahaaa. Glad to see it works. Too hilarious. Thank you for the great review, my friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness.

Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

This story is well paced. The language is without frills. The story stays on point. The ending is well written.

Thanks for a good read. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022

Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Dellsworth. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.

reply by dellsworthpoet on 07-Apr-2022

You are welcome/

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Ha ha ha, you made me smile with this naughty saucy write, you can't keep a girl off the Fanstory site, may I call you handy Andy? He he he, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022

Lol. Thank you for the great review, Dolly. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.