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Comment from irishauthorme
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Great! So good to see you back posting!
Spot on with your message, many will read, few will follow,' but we still have to make an effort.
I give thanks every day, and still believe all things come from God.
irish

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    Thanks so much Irish, yes we're all else fails I can fall back on the haiku form. I saw a show on kvie on included Tai chi, and contemplating yin and yang, was inspired to write this piece.

    Thanks again, I really appreciate your kind comments and insight.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger

    ~ : - D ~
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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Good to see you back again. We spend so much time in today worrying about tomorrow, completely missing the moment. We just have to remember: "for, my tomorrows
are only a day away."

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
    Thanks so much for your warm comments, I really appreciate your time.

    Blessings,
    Brother Badger
Comment from lauralumummu
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I love this one well done. Thankfulness is the key to peace and happiness.
I love the line time is so precious. No matter what is going on in our lives, God is good all the time. God bless you, Laura

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
    Thanks so much for your warm comments, I really appreciate your kind words. You made my day!
    Thanks again,

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Nicely done with lots of good observations about living a better life. Your problem is that you switched tense part way through. It was your own internal story (first person) and then you switched to "you" (which is second person) and then switched to us (which is first person plural). You also don't need a comma after for. Best of luck with this and keep on writing. You have talent and understanding.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
    Thanks for your help with this, I really appreciate your comments.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger
Comment from royowen
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Yes indeed Darren we should be grateful to God in all aspects of our lives. and as we age, we should only look forward to tomorrow, we may not have the day after, beautifully written my friend, haven't seen you for awhile, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
    Thanks Roy, your writing always inspires me. I really appreciate you reading and reviewing my newest work.