Interpretations For Consideration
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Moley Smoke"An Ekphrastic Poetry Collection for NaPoWriMo 2022
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Comment from Carolyn Dooley
At first, I thought it was someone who was smoking too much. They are surrounded by stifling smoke. Last, I was thinking about the environment full of smog, disturbing the variety of animals on the planet.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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At first, I thought it was someone who was smoking too much. They are surrounded by stifling smoke. Last, I was thinking about the environment full of smog, disturbing the variety of animals on the planet.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate it :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Another well-written rhyming poem with great humor. A little twist at the end, where the mole is the guilty one who has started this fire. I would change weird to weird (autocorrect actually just did it for me as I was typing this).
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Another well-written rhyming poem with great humor. A little twist at the end, where the mole is the guilty one who has started this fire. I would change weird to weird (autocorrect actually just did it for me as I was typing this).
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much, Pam, for your kind feedback and for pointing out the spelling error! I've put it right ;)
Thanks and kind regards, Debra
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Moley Smoke, comes to the reader via some ganja inhalation. Oh no, beware this smokey venue where rodents appear and admit to toastal dysfunction.
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This poem, Moley Smoke, comes to the reader via some ganja inhalation. Oh no, beware this smokey venue where rodents appear and admit to toastal dysfunction.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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LOL! I love your feedback - thanks! :)
Comment from Teri7
Debra, This is a very cute and well written Ekphrastic poem you have penned with very good rhymes and very neat imagery that fits perfect. love and blessings, Teri
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Debra, This is a very cute and well written Ekphrastic poem you have penned with very good rhymes and very neat imagery that fits perfect. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Teri, for your lovely feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Moley Smoke
by Debra White
Excellent Ekphrastic Rhymed Poem. The rhymes do not seem forced and your poem flows well. It draws upon emotions and it presents strong images.
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Moley Smoke
by Debra White
Excellent Ekphrastic Rhymed Poem. The rhymes do not seem forced and your poem flows well. It draws upon emotions and it presents strong images.
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Gypsy, for your kind feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from moongirlwriter
Too funny! The fragrance of burnt toast is NOT fun and it takes forever for it to go away. I do like the artwork you've chosen too. . .fits perfectly.
Best of luck with this well-written poem in the contest.
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Too funny! The fragrance of burnt toast is NOT fun and it takes forever for it to go away. I do like the artwork you've chosen too. . .fits perfectly.
Best of luck with this well-written poem in the contest.
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind feedback :) Did you see the mole in the smoke?!
Best wishes, Debra :)
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yes. . .I thought that might be the mole.
Too funny.
