FanStory Dream
Waking from a dream50 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good image for your story, Terry.
-Thanks for the note; your subconscious
must work well for you!
-You wrote a good story about the experience.
-A good hook at the beginning.
-Good descriptive detail about writing the story.
-A very good ending, too.
-Hope your dream comes true, and you win the contest
with a "gaggle of geese!"
-Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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-A good image for your story, Terry.
-Thanks for the note; your subconscious
must work well for you!
-You wrote a good story about the experience.
-A good hook at the beginning.
-Good descriptive detail about writing the story.
-A very good ending, too.
-Hope your dream comes true, and you win the contest
with a "gaggle of geese!"
-Well done.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Pam, you write great reviews! Thank you. I did come in third, there was a really good story that won. Terry.
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You are very welcome, Terry. I enjoy reviewing and sharing ideas. I am glad you got a third place finish.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Terry, I liked this and it resonates. It probably resonates with a lot of us. I can think of something and write it down. Then I go to sleep and in the morning, I have no idea what I meant. Good luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Hi Terry, I liked this and it resonates. It probably resonates with a lot of us. I can think of something and write it down. Then I go to sleep and in the morning, I have no idea what I meant. Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you, got a third for this one, there was a very good entry. Terry.
Comment from Ashlyn Stone
It was a cute. You don't know until the end that you were dreaming or were you because you received an email. It was grammatically correct. Thank you for sharing your writing.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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It was a cute. You don't know until the end that you were dreaming or were you because you received an email. It was grammatically correct. Thank you for sharing your writing.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much. Terry
Comment from Sallyo
Ha! What fun. I expect many of us have written ourselves cryptic notes to remind us of inspirations... but then- what on earth did that mean? Never mind, you got your clever story anyway.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Ha! What fun. I expect many of us have written ourselves cryptic notes to remind us of inspirations... but then- what on earth did that mean? Never mind, you got your clever story anyway.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you, those dang geese! Terry.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Terry.
I'm a fan of flash fiction. In fact I write 100 word stories every month that I publish, but not here. In limited word count flash fiction you have to use the right words because your message has to be delivered in short order. Nicely done here. I carry a voice recorder with me every day and dictate ideas for stories and poetry.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Hello Terry.
I'm a fan of flash fiction. In fact I write 100 word stories every month that I publish, but not here. In limited word count flash fiction you have to use the right words because your message has to be delivered in short order. Nicely done here. I carry a voice recorder with me every day and dictate ideas for stories and poetry.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you, there was a really good entry in this contest that won, I got a 3rd. Terry.
Comment from Debra White
Don't you just hate it when that happens?! I have the most amazing ideas for potential poems and stories when I'm on the brink of sleep.... and in the morning, 'poof!' - Can I heck remember what the amazing idea was!
At least you had the thought to email yourself - shame the gaggle of geese 'key' didn't unlock the rest of the story for you! This was a fun read though ;)
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Don't you just hate it when that happens?! I have the most amazing ideas for potential poems and stories when I'm on the brink of sleep.... and in the morning, 'poof!' - Can I heck remember what the amazing idea was!
At least you had the thought to email yourself - shame the gaggle of geese 'key' didn't unlock the rest of the story for you! This was a fun read though ;)
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thanks, dang geese! Terry.
Comment from Annette R.
I commend all who take the challenge of word count flash fiction. And if I understand the point correctly you used your computer to remember the key to a possible story. Better than the scraps of paper around the house that I use for ideas. Sorry it doesn't seem to have worked but funny.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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I commend all who take the challenge of word count flash fiction. And if I understand the point correctly you used your computer to remember the key to a possible story. Better than the scraps of paper around the house that I use for ideas. Sorry it doesn't seem to have worked but funny.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Terry.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I liked your dream, I mean story about the gaggle of geese. You did a great job, and I didn't see any errors. Good luck in the contest. Have a great evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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I liked your dream, I mean story about the gaggle of geese. You did a great job, and I didn't see any errors. Good luck in the contest. Have a great evening. Shirley
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you! Terry
Comment from nomi338
That is not a bad idea. It could work for some, I doubt however, that it would work for me. Too easy. If it is not difficult, I tend to ignore it. Systematic of my underlying problems. Nevertheless, I am impressed by your post.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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That is not a bad idea. It could work for some, I doubt however, that it would work for me. Too easy. If it is not difficult, I tend to ignore it. Systematic of my underlying problems. Nevertheless, I am impressed by your post.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Lol, it?s not easy being you! I do understand! Terry.
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Thank you. It is a tough job but someone has to do it. LOL.
Comment from Spitfire
Interesting. I keep a pen and paper on my nite stand in case my dreams send me an idea. You captured both the 'tragedy' and humor of this story. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Interesting. I keep a pen and paper on my nite stand in case my dreams send me an idea. You captured both the 'tragedy' and humor of this story. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading! Terry.
