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Highlights of Home

Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "A is for Apple"
A Tribute to Our Family Home

7 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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Mama,
This sounds like such a nice place to sit on a warm summer's day eating an apple which the tree provided. It is sad you had to leave. It sounds like your mother had died. Sorry for your loss.
You followed the form well
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan

 Comment Written 24-May-2022

Comment from Sally Law
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If I had to pick one crop to raise, it would be an apple orchard. I love them and make the journey to to my native state to buy them fresh. The area is full of lush orchards and the best first of the season apples, in my humble opinion. Pink Lady are my favorite. Sending you my best for this marvelous poem, dear Mama,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Thank you, Sal! Mmm, Pink Ladies. Yum. Honeycrisp are scrumptious, too! Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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A wonderful well-versed poem not only of the fruit it bore but of the warm memories it held from climbing the tree to its wonderful fruit for Mom's applesauce.
Very sweet!
Best wishes and regards,
Mary

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Thank you so much, Mary! I am honored you take the time to read my poems. Sending well wishes your way!
Comment from LisaMay
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aaah.... memories, memories. You've covered many aspects of this tree's importance in your life - fun to climb, its beauty and age, its prolific fruit, and its link to your Mom's cooking ability. There are so many things that make us nostalgic when we reminisce about our family home - I'm sure you'll keep us entertained while feeling somewhat sad as you add chapters to your book, 'Highlights of Home'.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Thank you, LisaMay! I always love your kind and thoughtful comments. This is quite the journey indeed. Sending lots of well wishes your way!
Comment from Ric Myworld
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The worst part is: you won't realized all the memories that are packed into the old home place and everything that goes with it until long after you've all moved on. Then, they'll come trickling back one after the other. :-) Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Oh, Ric, you are so very right indeed. I am glad we can keep our memories amidst this ever-changing world. Thank you for taking time to send me a note! Sending well wishes your way.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I adore apple trees and there is nothing more pleasing than picking a fresh apple off the tree and eating it. My daughter has two apple trees in her garden and the fruit haul eat year is abundant. I loved the sentiment here, a pleasurable read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Dear Dolly, thank you so very much for your sweet note. I love hearing about your daughter's trees. Yum. Sending lots of well wishes your way!
Comment from tfawcus
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What a wonderful tree and one that obviously holds many happy memories for you and your family. There is something about our relationship with trees of this kind that is heartwarming.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Indeed! Yes, I do have a tree fetish. Just something about them. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment!