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Comment from AprilViolet
This poem shows that people shouldn't take what they have for granted. Jealousy comes In all forms. I'm sorry you have to go through these things. Six stars
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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This poem shows that people shouldn't take what they have for granted. Jealousy comes In all forms. I'm sorry you have to go through these things. Six stars
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this great star filled review. :)
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
This is truly a humbling admission of what came to us too fast! For most, being so busy, and taking it for granted, thinking it would youth would longer. Human nature makes it easy to express jealousy of those who have a pain free existence and ability to do more. Nice job on your lovely poem. I'm right there with you my friend!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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This is truly a humbling admission of what came to us too fast! For most, being so busy, and taking it for granted, thinking it would youth would longer. Human nature makes it easy to express jealousy of those who have a pain free existence and ability to do more. Nice job on your lovely poem. I'm right there with you my friend!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful and understanding review...it's really appreciated. :)
Comment from jaded831
I can relate to your poem, being physically handicapped for most of my life. I have learned to deal with my feelings. Your poem brings out the feeling of jealousy well.
Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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I can relate to your poem, being physically handicapped for most of my life. I have learned to deal with my feelings. Your poem brings out the feeling of jealousy well.
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review and your kind words.:)
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
This is an excellent poem on jealousy. First, I love your green graphics, symbol of envy.
I like your rhyme and your message.
The last stanza is a great summation.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, cindy
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Author,
This is an excellent poem on jealousy. First, I love your green graphics, symbol of envy.
I like your rhyme and your message.
The last stanza is a great summation.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, cindy
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this great review and for taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well written poem. The picture you chose definitely compliments this poem well. Your poem describes what jealously is like. I like the poetic devices throughout this poem. Nice job.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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This is a well written poem. The picture you chose definitely compliments this poem well. Your poem describes what jealously is like. I like the poetic devices throughout this poem. Nice job.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you, I really appreciate this terrific review. :)
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You're very welcome.
Comment from zanya
This is a poem about the power of the feeling of jealousy and how it can reach its tentacles into so many areas of our lives, making us miserable and unhappy- well structured
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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This is a poem about the power of the feeling of jealousy and how it can reach its tentacles into so many areas of our lives, making us miserable and unhappy- well structured
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you, this nice review means a lot to me. :)
Comment from Wendy G
I understand the feelings of jealousy and envy and frustration you have expressed and your poem will resonate with many. It's very well written and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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I understand the feelings of jealousy and envy and frustration you have expressed and your poem will resonate with many. It's very well written and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this fine review, it means a lot. :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Jealousy can be the green-eyed monster when you want to run, jump, and be like you use to be. Age does make a difference. Have you ever thought about reading and listening to music if you can't dance?
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Jealousy can be the green-eyed monster when you want to run, jump, and be like you use to be. Age does make a difference. Have you ever thought about reading and listening to music if you can't dance?
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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I love reading and music, so good suggestions. Thank you so much. :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Jealousy can be the green eyes monster when you want to run, jump, and be like you use to be. Age does make a difference. Have you ever thought about reading and listening to music if you can't dance?
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Jealousy can be the green eyes monster when you want to run, jump, and be like you use to be. Age does make a difference. Have you ever thought about reading and listening to music if you can't dance?
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you for good advice. :)
Comment from LJbutterfly
This poem fits me to a tee. I have rheumatoid arthritis and have difficulty walking. I was amazed when I read your words expressing my thoughts. This poem is well written and rhythmic. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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This poem fits me to a tee. I have rheumatoid arthritis and have difficulty walking. I was amazed when I read your words expressing my thoughts. This poem is well written and rhythmic. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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I know I'm not alone, thank you for sharing your experience. I really appreciate it
