Clouds
Beautiful and temperamental4 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Clouds are interesting subjects .. i love to watch them drift by.
Sometimes I search for shapes that recall something... there are so many types .. I love the whipped creamed ones.
But I do appreciate the darker, stormy ones too. When I was young I loved to ride my bike ( without brakes) in stormy weather.
Contortionist is a cool word to describes clouds
The last verse is my favourite.
tears roll of your cheek as rain
I could see even the word pain fit
In pain , to me gives more meaning to the word tears.
And it rhymes with hurricane still.
Either though I still love your poem , glad I finally reviewed it.
Happy Easter to you Trask and your family members!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Clouds are interesting subjects .. i love to watch them drift by.
Sometimes I search for shapes that recall something... there are so many types .. I love the whipped creamed ones.
But I do appreciate the darker, stormy ones too. When I was young I loved to ride my bike ( without brakes) in stormy weather.
Contortionist is a cool word to describes clouds
The last verse is my favourite.
tears roll of your cheek as rain
I could see even the word pain fit
In pain , to me gives more meaning to the word tears.
And it rhymes with hurricane still.
Either though I still love your poem , glad I finally reviewed it.
Happy Easter to you Trask and your family members!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Happy Easter to you too Franka!
I really hope you are okay and could spend time with close friends😊
Thank you for your gracious review
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
What a lovely poem in so few words! My grandson and I not only watch the clouds for pictures, but he is into whirlwinds and anything vortex. A hurricane has a great voice! And your poem proves that God speaks through the clouds, if we are just willing to listen! Beautiful!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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What a lovely poem in so few words! My grandson and I not only watch the clouds for pictures, but he is into whirlwinds and anything vortex. A hurricane has a great voice! And your poem proves that God speaks through the clouds, if we are just willing to listen! Beautiful!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you:)
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Those clouds are beautiful, cirrus clouds forming nimbus clouds before rain. I often imagined if only we could float around on those clouds. They look like cotton from an airplane. Thank you for posting.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Those clouds are beautiful, cirrus clouds forming nimbus clouds before rain. I often imagined if only we could float around on those clouds. They look like cotton from an airplane. Thank you for posting.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Many thanks for your review:))
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You are welcome.
Comment from oliver818
this is a very nice poem and a great entry for this competition. I particularly enjoyed the ending where you say "your anger sparks the hurricane"- This is a great line, it contrasts with the rest of the poem in a very interesting way. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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this is a very nice poem and a great entry for this competition. I particularly enjoyed the ending where you say "your anger sparks the hurricane"- This is a great line, it contrasts with the rest of the poem in a very interesting way. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you for kind review:)
