The Path
I will never leave you nor forsake you. Hebrews 13:518 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I like your acrostic poem (I can't write them.) It is wise to follow God's path and not question Him. I have to remind myself to do this from time to time. Thank you for the reminder.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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I like your acrostic poem (I can't write them.) It is wise to follow God's path and not question Him. I have to remind myself to do this from time to time. Thank you for the reminder.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Thank you. I didn't realize I could write them either. It just sort a fell into place. Thank YOU for reminding me to remind myself. I tend to stray a bit from the straight and narrow, and I have to remind myself often. What a blessing to know God is always there. Thans again. John
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Plot the path that I shall go
And that's the one I'll take.
The future's not for me to know
His promise, He'll never break."
Great entry for this contest. I am so glad that the Lord has a plan for our lives, and we can safely trust Him to guide us all the way.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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"Plot the path that I shall go
And that's the one I'll take.
The future's not for me to know
His promise, He'll never break."
Great entry for this contest. I am so glad that the Lord has a plan for our lives, and we can safely trust Him to guide us all the way.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Your words are so true, and on this particular day, I needed to hear them. Thank you. John
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You are welcome, John
Comment from Sally Law
A beautifully penned and illustrated acrostic poem for the contest, John. God will surely keep every promise as our future gives way to eternity. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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A beautifully penned and illustrated acrostic poem for the contest, John. God will surely keep every promise as our future gives way to eternity. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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I can always count on you, Sally for a wonderfully, inspiring review. Thank you so much!
John
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You are most welcome! Blessings,
Sal :))
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Whatever path you take, he will guide you in the correct direction. Believe and always keep the faith. I like the picture and enjoyed reading your message in a poem. Take care and stay on the right path.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Whatever path you take, he will guide you in the correct direction. Believe and always keep the faith. I like the picture and enjoyed reading your message in a poem. Take care and stay on the right path.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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The right path is a very narrow one and it's easy to stray. We travel it with faith and trust knowing that our God, with His mercy and grace, will keep us safe. I love people from Alabama...I actually married one. Thank you for your review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine acrostic as we walk into the unknown and cannot report back as the secrets are kept forever, a chilling and write full of uncertainty, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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A fine acrostic as we walk into the unknown and cannot report back as the secrets are kept forever, a chilling and write full of uncertainty, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Dolly. It's always nice to get a complimentary review from such a gifted poet. Thanks.
John
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, The PATH, follows the vertical, first-letter theme and allows that God has a plan and a way to proceed. ..........................................................................................
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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This acrostic poem, The PATH, follows the vertical, first-letter theme and allows that God has a plan and a way to proceed. ..........................................................................................
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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And all we need to do is trust in Him and have faith. Thank you, Bill for your review. John
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a very nice acrostic poem with a lovely witness to your faith. This is a really interesting picture as well. Best of luck in the acrostic poetry contest.
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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This is a very nice acrostic poem with a lovely witness to your faith. This is a really interesting picture as well. Best of luck in the acrostic poetry contest.
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for your comments and lovely review. John
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your acrostic is in great form--love the rhyme, the smooth flow, and the great and true message. The image is perfect to pair with your well thought out words.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Your acrostic is in great form--love the rhyme, the smooth flow, and the great and true message. The image is perfect to pair with your well thought out words.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Thanks, Jan. You're very kind. I always love your reviews. John
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