Proposal Poetry
Romance 5-7-513 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This romantic 5-7-5, Proposal Poetry, has the right setup and finds its rightful place in the hands of the propositioner while in the petitioning position.
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This romantic 5-7-5, Proposal Poetry, has the right setup and finds its rightful place in the hands of the propositioner while in the petitioning position.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like the old school of bending down on one knee. I think probably this tradition will return. Years ago, this is how a man would ask the woman to marry him.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Like the old school of bending down on one knee. I think probably this tradition will return. Years ago, this is how a man would ask the woman to marry him.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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It's how I asked my wife, complete with poem. Thanks for your review.
Comment from JLR
To emotively deliver a thoughtful message within a meager 17 syllables requires command of word usage and presentation of skills of a writer who has honed their skills. Your is a solid representation of this and complement the contest participation. Good luck in the booth.
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To emotively deliver a thoughtful message within a meager 17 syllables requires command of word usage and presentation of skills of a writer who has honed their skills. Your is a solid representation of this and complement the contest participation. Good luck in the booth.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
Comment from Wendy G
That all does sound like the epitome of romance. Your poem is very well presented and meets the syllable requirements. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
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That all does sound like the epitome of romance. Your poem is very well presented and meets the syllable requirements. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well crafted poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your 5-7-5 syllable count meets the requirements for this writing . Your last line concludes the poem well. Nice job.
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This is a well crafted poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your 5-7-5 syllable count meets the requirements for this writing . Your last line concludes the poem well. Nice job.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Romance writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation. It's very romantic and sensual. Good luck in the contest.
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Romance writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation. It's very romantic and sensual. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
Comment from jessizero
This was so romantic, and you managed to pull it off in the required 17 syllables. That's excellent. Thank you for sharing this proposal here, and best wishes.
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This was so romantic, and you managed to pull it off in the required 17 syllables. That's excellent. Thank you for sharing this proposal here, and best wishes.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
Comment from Regina Elliott
Wow, this is such a pretty
and endearing write. Back in
the day I was a cake decorator. I made a few 6"
round proposal cakes for
men who had "Will you
marry me?" written with
my small frosting tip on them.
My very best wishes for the
contest. All the best. ~
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Wow, this is such a pretty
and endearing write. Back in
the day I was a cake decorator. I made a few 6"
round proposal cakes for
men who had "Will you
marry me?" written with
my small frosting tip on them.
My very best wishes for the
contest. All the best. ~
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
Comment from Chris Davis
Loved it! I am a romantic at heart and this poem definitely illustrated romance Good choice of picture supporting the piece. Thank you for sharing your poem.
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Loved it! I am a romantic at heart and this poem definitely illustrated romance Good choice of picture supporting the piece. Thank you for sharing your poem.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
A few words in a poem with so much meaning. You did a great job. And the picture is great, it goes perfectly with the story. This told a huge story.
And it is impressive. Thank you for the post.
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A few words in a poem with so much meaning. You did a great job. And the picture is great, it goes perfectly with the story. This told a huge story.
And it is impressive. Thank you for the post.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
