Whisper
Romance 5/7/56 total reviews
Comment from E. Denison
Hi Zanya,
Couldn't help it - had to take a look at the portfolio of a writer, who was so generous in reviewing my work. What do I find here but truly beautiful work in return. I see why you won this contest! You have used a wrapped line, carefully folded to the 5-7-5 structure to create a romance poem that transcends the physical. You've told an entire narrative in your brief lines, simultaneously romantic and heartbreaking, soulful and hopeful. Really nice work. I can't wait to see more!
Evie
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Hi Zanya,
Couldn't help it - had to take a look at the portfolio of a writer, who was so generous in reviewing my work. What do I find here but truly beautiful work in return. I see why you won this contest! You have used a wrapped line, carefully folded to the 5-7-5 structure to create a romance poem that transcends the physical. You've told an entire narrative in your brief lines, simultaneously romantic and heartbreaking, soulful and hopeful. Really nice work. I can't wait to see more!
Evie
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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And thanks again for those 6 shining stars zanya
Comment from LisaMay
Love endures forever. I am so pleased for you that this poignant poem won the contest. It sums up how those we love linger on and still share a loving connection with us.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Love endures forever. I am so pleased for you that this poignant poem won the contest. It sums up how those we love linger on and still share a loving connection with us.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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And thanks again for those stars zanya
Comment from JLR
To emotively deliver a thoughtful message within a meager 17 syllables requires command of word usage and presentation of skills of a writer who has honed their skills. Your is a solid representation of this and complement the contest participation. Good luck in the booth.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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To emotively deliver a thoughtful message within a meager 17 syllables requires command of word usage and presentation of skills of a writer who has honed their skills. Your is a solid representation of this and complement the contest participation. Good luck in the booth.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Superb review zanya
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
This is beautiful, but I sense a very sad story, by the feeling and the words . If it's true, than Im sorry & you have my understanding!
Lovely poem!!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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This is beautiful, but I sense a very sad story, by the feeling and the words . If it's true, than Im sorry & you have my understanding!
Lovely poem!!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Thanks for a thoughtful review zanya
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❤️
Comment from jessizero
This was so sad and sweet at the same time. Love endures and outlasts even death. Thank you for sharing this poem here. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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This was so sad and sweet at the same time. Love endures and outlasts even death. Thank you for sharing this poem here. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, that is powerful. I lost so many loved ones, but I feel their presence all the time. They are there, though not in physical form anymore.
Fantastic. I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Oh, that is powerful. I lost so many loved ones, but I feel their presence all the time. They are there, though not in physical form anymore.
Fantastic. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Thanks for sharing zanya
