What Words Can Do, My Love
What Is Your Love Language?21 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I do agree with the thought of this piece of artistry. So very difficult to be succinct and yet understandable with only seventeen syllables but you have done it, my FS friend. Good luck in placing in the top three places.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
I do agree with the thought of this piece of artistry. So very difficult to be succinct and yet understandable with only seventeen syllables but you have done it, my FS friend. Good luck in placing in the top three places.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Wow! Thank you, Tom. I appreciate your thoughtful review and kind remarks.
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Comment from karenina
Hello, Seville! I now smile when I see you have posted. You have a sensitivity that comes through in each work you share. I do believe it is high time I become your fan!
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
Hello, Seville! I now smile when I see you have posted. You have a sensitivity that comes through in each work you share. I do believe it is high time I become your fan!
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much, karenina. I am humbled by your comments. I appreciate your reading, reviewing and rating of my work. It is such an honor to receive your encouragement.
Comment from Janet Foor
I enjoyed reading your 5/7/5 poem. Your message and the question was very creative. We do all express our love in different ways but words, especially ones we write down have a powerful impact.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
I enjoyed reading your 5/7/5 poem. Your message and the question was very creative. We do all express our love in different ways but words, especially ones we write down have a powerful impact.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Janet. I appreciate your thoughtful review and kind remarks.
Comment from Boogienights
Expressing yourself in words is a wonderful way to communicate. I for one love poetry and wish someone would write one for me. A really great contest entry, best of luck. :)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
Expressing yourself in words is a wonderful way to communicate. I for one love poetry and wish someone would write one for me. A really great contest entry, best of luck. :)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Boogienights. I appreciate your thoughtful review and kind remarks. Thanks for reading, reviewing and rating my work.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
There are several wonderful poems in this contest about love. Yours is one of them. Love is eternal, everlasting when you first get married. And you always want marriage to remain that way.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
There are several wonderful poems in this contest about love. Yours is one of them. Love is eternal, everlasting when you first get married. And you always want marriage to remain that way.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Rosemary. I truly agree with your sentiments. I appreciate your thoughtful and insightful commentary. Thanks for reading, reviewing and rating my work.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' What Words Can, Do My Love', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is.
Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you got on?
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
' What Words Can, Do My Love', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is.
Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you got on?
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you, duchess! I always appreciate your thoughtful commentary and supportive remarks.
Dear Anon,
You're more than welcome.
Bless you and take care,
the Duchess
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and examples show
the importance of words.
-They can, indeed, do many things that
are positive and of service to others.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and examples show
the importance of words.
-They can, indeed, do many things that
are positive and of service to others.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Pam. I really appreciate your thorough and thoughtful review. Thanks for reading, reviewing and rating my work.
Comment from JLR
To emotively deliver a thoughtful message within a meager 17 syllables requires command of word usage and presentation of skills of a writer who has honed their skills. Your is a solid representation of this and complement the contest participation. Good luck in the booth.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
To emotively deliver a thoughtful message within a meager 17 syllables requires command of word usage and presentation of skills of a writer who has honed their skills. Your is a solid representation of this and complement the contest participation. Good luck in the booth.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you, JLR. It is challenging to express a love thought with so few words. Thanks for your insight and thoughtful review. I appreciate your reading, reviewing and rating of my work.
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, there are several different love languages, as your notes indicate, and the important thing is to recognise and accept each other's way of expressing love. Well written. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
Yes, there are several different love languages, as your notes indicate, and the important thing is to recognise and accept each other's way of expressing love. Well written. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Wendy. It's always a challenge to express a thought or message about love in so few words. Thanks for your review and rating.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed this thought provoking poem. My love language is time. This topic is relevant and should be discussed openly. If we knew each others live languages, personal relationships can improve greatly.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
I enjoyed this thought provoking poem. My love language is time. This topic is relevant and should be discussed openly. If we knew each others live languages, personal relationships can improve greatly.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Thank you, K L Rockquemore. I'm glad you enjoyed the message. It's a simple message, but also a very important one. Imagine the harmony we would all experience within our relationships if we could assess, interpret and speak another's love language. I appreciate your insight and kind remarks.