Shorthand
Made for us by God.33 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I'm so glad you recognise this is God's world, when I see country's coveting other lands and claiming it for there own, and doing dastardly things to other country's as if hey have some divine right do so, makes my blood boil, He's generous with His Gifts, unlike us, well done, blessings Roy
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I'm so glad you recognise this is God's world, when I see country's coveting other lands and claiming it for there own, and doing dastardly things to other country's as if hey have some divine right do so, makes my blood boil, He's generous with His Gifts, unlike us, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
You have creatively written spiritual poetry with a powerful message and reminder of who God is. "A walk through God's world," reveals many mysteries, beauty, and wonders to behold. You've summed it up nicely in a poem. Great work.
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You have creatively written spiritual poetry with a powerful message and reminder of who God is. "A walk through God's world," reveals many mysteries, beauty, and wonders to behold. You've summed it up nicely in a poem. Great work.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
Comment from LovnPeace
I adore this picture. You have done a great job of pointing out just a drop of all God's creations that in my eyes are breathtaking. Very enjoyable. Blessings, Barbara
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I adore this picture. You have done a great job of pointing out just a drop of all God's creations that in my eyes are breathtaking. Very enjoyable. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
Comment from karenina
Loved your message delivered in a series of perfectly rhymed couplets!
An important reminder to us all to take a moment and enjoy the journey, for life's path is strewn with so many more blessings than we realize!
Love that photo... We're all God's children!
Karenina
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Loved your message delivered in a series of perfectly rhymed couplets!
An important reminder to us all to take a moment and enjoy the journey, for life's path is strewn with so many more blessings than we realize!
Love that photo... We're all God's children!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This should have been a contest entry on faith. It is exquisite yet simple as it presents the beauty and wonder of God's creation.
Beautifully descriptive in rhyme.
Best wishes and regards, Willie.
Mary
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This should have been a contest entry on faith. It is exquisite yet simple as it presents the beauty and wonder of God's creation.
Beautifully descriptive in rhyme.
Best wishes and regards, Willie.
Mary
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
Comment from Paul McFarland
It's interesting to see your outlook on life in a poem, Willie. You have covered a lot of territory in just a few stanzas. That was a clever choice for a title.
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It's interesting to see your outlook on life in a poem, Willie. You have covered a lot of territory in just a few stanzas. That was a clever choice for a title.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
Comment from Wendy G
This is quite lovely - and I was expecting it to be in the My Faith contest. You have highlighted in short form many of the blessings God bestows, and each is worthy of meditation and praise. Beautiful.
Wendy
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This is quite lovely - and I was expecting it to be in the My Faith contest. You have highlighted in short form many of the blessings God bestows, and each is worthy of meditation and praise. Beautiful.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Willie P. Smith,
It's a nice piece of Spiritual Poetry having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, enchanting flow with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting worth enjoying wonderful acts of God!
The last two lines are particularly noteworthy.
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Hello Willie P. Smith,
It's a nice piece of Spiritual Poetry having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, enchanting flow with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting worth enjoying wonderful acts of God!
The last two lines are particularly noteworthy.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your rhyming couplets, Willie.
I enjoyed reading each one. I agree with you about how
only God can make what your well chosen words described.
Your poem had smooth flow and a supportive image.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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You did a great job with your rhyming couplets, Willie.
I enjoyed reading each one. I agree with you about how
only God can make what your well chosen words described.
Your poem had smooth flow and a supportive image.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully written, moving, and vividly descriptive of some of the greatest act of the Lord, done for His children, whom He loves.
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Your poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully written, moving, and vividly descriptive of some of the greatest act of the Lord, done for His children, whom He loves.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
